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Volume 1 p230


Volume 1 p230

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I overwrote it so it's non-existence now oops! o.o It was basically all the red eyes Vagus was mentioning earlier.

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I missed the earlier version. Is there a way to see the original post on Patreon or no?

Blahman2816

Looks nice~ I think overall it looks better and makes a bit more sense. Anyway, thanks for telling me, and considering it when you did.

Cres

Sly agrees with you, so I've changed the panel~

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I see, in relation with the eyes, I had assumed it was from Fabius and them, which made little sense, but if it was with the Gallade (Levi...there is a AoT joke in here...somewhere...) then it would make more sense. But...reading on the pages, he did mention it and tell him but it didn't seem to in depth, even from being told by it from Vagus, I'd say that a picture of Levi would make more sense. Either way, yeah that's pretty much the big thing. Tell me what he says about it~

Cres

Leon knows about all the glowy eye monsters from Vagus, he told everyone about the story of Laconians <a href="http://ssp-comics.com/comics/toe/?page=129" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://ssp-comics.com/comics/toe/?page=129</a> but yeah, maybe having Levi the Gallade there would be a better choice. I'll talk to Sly about it.

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Hmm....not a huge fan of this page. The eye background was used earlier on, so it being used again here feels awkward (like a transitional word being used to quickly after the first time). Plus outside of the gallade from before, Leon has no knowledge of the others...so it seems odd to use here. Granted it could just be an allude...but my point still stands. There are other things...but those are my main issues...

Cres


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