Volume 1 p182
Added 2016-01-22 12:13:55 +0000 UTC
Comments
"their" refers to the other "wanna-be adventurer", nothing wrong there~
Tales of Elysium
2016-01-25 04:06:48 +0000 UTCHe says "their" but it doesn't have anything explaining who they are, so it reads kind of odd. It would make more sense if he were to say "the last group's adventures" or something along those lines.
Plailect
2016-01-24 05:06:40 +0000 UTCHuh? Which line? What is weird about it? o.o
Tales of Elysium
2016-01-24 04:48:13 +0000 UTCThe second set of lines in panel one is phrased kind of oddly (consider revising?), but other than that it looks good.
Plailect
2016-01-23 06:21:31 +0000 UTC
