Harem House Chapter 41
Added 2025-10-04 12:00:16 +0000 UTCLynn knelt in the dirt, facing the doused fire
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I guess 'took' her by the chin is more common. I meant to specify that she was shaking Lynn's chin between grabbing and turning her face while Lynn struggled to turn away, but conflated that with the more common description of holding her chin. So maybe not a typo, but likely a place where what I was trying to convey might not have made it across as well as I intended.
S. E. Aeghann
2025-10-10 00:59:42 +0000 UTCI think this might be a typo too “Lynn looked away from Kelly’s piercing green eyes, but Kelly SHOOK her by the chin and tried to catch her gaze.” Should it read “Lynn looked away from Kelly’s piercing green eyes, but Kelly TOOK her by the chin and tried to catch her gaze.”
Rob58
2025-10-10 00:56:32 +0000 UTCRight? Did you enjoy the ride?
S. E. Aeghann
2025-10-05 15:33:02 +0000 UTCWow! That chapter was some ride!
saffy
2025-10-05 15:31:39 +0000 UTC
