Sylver's Soul 01
Added 2025-08-27 12:00:18 +0000 UTCAuthor’s Note: Continuing the “trying new thing
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Im trying to read all of your concept chapter stories, and im just getting more and more upset there isn't more, the excitement of a new book is definitely a part of it, but I think one of the things you excell in is the world building and character development/introduction. And I get hooked immediately
master19man
2025-10-31 03:21:41 +0000 UTCGreat intro, very realistic setup, definitively needs to be developped
ThL
2025-09-03 09:23:57 +0000 UTCI really enjoyed the slow build-up, letting us get to know the characters. I look forward to more of this story as you just whetted my appetite.
Flamethrow
2025-08-27 23:00:26 +0000 UTCI am interested to see how it develops, has some good strings to pull on
John Henry
2025-08-27 22:34:12 +0000 UTCHe's a typo, lol. I'll fix that in a second.
S. E. Aeghann
2025-08-27 20:52:07 +0000 UTCThis intro was a bit long-winded. However, the atmosphere of this town is well captured. The characters make me curious.
Nicholas Ramage
2025-08-27 20:20:22 +0000 UTCWho is Sebastian?
Nicholas Ramage
2025-08-27 20:07:10 +0000 UTCVery curious to see how this develops!
Void_Syzygy
2025-08-27 17:53:37 +0000 UTCCute idea. Love to see how you integrate the supernatural into the story, but need intro stuff first.
David (Dobie) Gillis
2025-08-27 17:48:56 +0000 UTCGreat first chapter. Hope we see more.
Doctor_Hillbilly
2025-08-27 15:47:49 +0000 UTC
