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Harem House Chapter 39

Lynn stomped to her car after the elevator door

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Looking at Lynn's POV‘s, I get more and more the impression that Arthur is overestimating her intelligence. From his memories of high school, he still thinks of her as a Lioness on the prowl (and the author also relishes this flair in his Lynn intros). But she reminds me more of Wile E. Coyote. It's a lot of fun to watch her fail.

Nicholas Ramage

Lynn is desperate to find allies. With Sean she failed disgracefully, not least because she once again acted hastily and based on insufficient background information. If Sanjay still has a grudge against Arthur, she could use him for her own purposes. But it's questionable whether Lynn makes this connection (but his name was mentioned at brunch and the videos are very popular). Now she has his phone number. Sanjay could provide her with the necessary technical expertise for further plans. Her search for information now spans a wide net. The possibilities of harming the girlfriends through their parents seem threatening. Lynn is the enemy! “Der Feind hört mit!” She is on the warpath and the girls have an open flank in terms of intelligence. If I understand correctly, Lynn benefits from internet scams, or has plans to do so. Is she able to do this independently? Where did she get the necessary knowledge from? What did she even study? Lynn locks herself out, naked! Delicious!

Nicholas Ramage

It might be? Can you link me to it? I did complete a volumes 1-3 epub version a little while ago as a test run, and I put it into KDP essentially to test, but when I search for it as a customer nothing comes up, so it's possible someone stole it and put it up on their own, but it might also be the legit one. I'm still waiting for feedback from my Mega Fan patreons as to the formatting, if there are any glitches, etc. As for the art, if it's the one I'm thinking of it's a commission of Selene I had done a while ago based on an outfit she wore during the hotel arc, a little more punk rock than ballerina hippie. And yeah, it's just a reprint of the literotica series, not the novelized version I'm working on, so I didn't expect many people here to be interested since you can already read it for free online.

S. E. Aeghann

I saw that someone on Amazon is offering "Harem House Web Series Volumes 1-3" as an eBook for Kindle. Is this real? I was surprised that it wasn't announced here. I took this opportunity to reread the story from the beginning. The cover image with Selene (?) bothered me a little. It reminds me of a character image from the RPG "Shadowrun" (cyberpunk fantasy, pen and paper). I had imagined Selene differently.

Nicholas Ramage

It's fairly new. She’s pretty pissed about Arthur severing her relationship with Deb.

S. E. Aeghann

"He deserved to be miserable. " This seems ... new to me. Is this something that you haven't introduced? That level of anger hasn't really been communicated, or have I missed it (I may have missed it.)

David (Dobie) Gillis


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