Harem House Chapter 34
Added 2025-02-01 13:00:13 +0000 UTCArthur walked Katelyn to her next class after t
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She will. And thanks! I didn't want her to sound dumb but I did want to make her dialogue distinct, so I'm glad that comes across!
S. E. Aeghann
2025-02-02 02:13:13 +0000 UTCSo first off great chapter! Thalia's dialogue is especially well done. You manage to make her sound like a non native speaker without making her sound unintelligent in the process, and you don't succumb to the magic dick fallacy when it comes to her either. My only beef is that Lynn *still* hasn't faced consequences.
Dan
2025-02-02 02:10:16 +0000 UTCYep! Good catch!
S. E. Aeghann
2025-02-01 21:20:09 +0000 UTC…fixing his apron and raising the washrag for the ditches. -> dishes?
saffy
2025-02-01 21:06:45 +0000 UTC
