Harem House Chapter 33
Added 2024-12-28 13:00:08 +0000 UTCDorm life held many advantages that Rani took f
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I was nervous about Lynn and more drama coming but now I think the story needs a little bit of drama and development as you are doing right now. I hope Lynn's shenanigans come back to get her and she gets what she deserves. The story got so far and I'm already too invested in the story to wait for more chapters and read it whole so I don't have to wait if there is a cliffhanger. It got me totally hooked, wonderful idea for a story and amazing writing.
Heretic
2024-12-29 18:00:20 +0000 UTCThanks! The initial reaction to Lynn's appearance and machinations was extremely negative, so I'm hopeful the changes between WIP versions and now helped, and glad to see someone likes seeing progress on that end lol.
S. E. Aeghann
2024-12-29 02:15:56 +0000 UTCExcited for how Lynn's scheming will come back to bite her. I really like theese chapters where it builds on the story more keep it up.♥
zichli
2024-12-29 01:44:47 +0000 UTC
