Lynn
Added 2024-10-01 17:55:47 +0000 UTCAfter reading chapter 30, there was some discussion about Lynn's future, and I'm curious to know what the majority opinion is.
If you haven't read chapter 30 yet, go read that first, then vote on this.
In your opinion, what arc would you like to see Lynn undertake?
In the case of an arc not being mutually exclusive, just pick whichever one you'd prefer most.
Feel free to comment, explain your choice, etc.
Also, this is not a binding thing saying I'll do whatever wins. I'm curious to see what you, the readers, want though.
Comments
I want to see her vanquished and out of their lives, because from everything we know of her so far, not only in relation to the harem but her entire life history, she has not shown any capacity or desire to improve and become a better person.
Neil Smith
2025-04-27 03:23:18 +0000 UTCYou do a phenomenal job of showing her switchiness and inability to reconcile her submissive side. Her dominant side is overweaning and destructive and the more she tries to be in control, the worse she hurts everyone. Breaking that down entirely in surrender feels like the natural conquering/redeeming arc. She doesn't come out the other side what she came in as. I want to see you explore the root of Lynn's shift from his friend to his tormentor, from her perspective. Build up the mythology in her head. Also, I think any of her acceptance and redemption to the group should be led by Kelly and Selene. She underestimates Selene and who better to teach her the nature of service as her repentence?
Trey
2025-01-26 12:49:57 +0000 UTCI think the same only way "conquered" works is for Lynn's plans to fail in such a way that she is left emotionally vulnerable and at the mercy of the harem. For example she ropes in another guy for whatever her plan is and almost gets raped and the only help she can get is the harem? The way it has been written the only way see it working for Lynn to be in an emotionally dark place, trapped by her own actions, with Kelly her only salvation. I think you can use any of the girls to find her, but Kelly and Selene are the keys.
SathurnFox
2024-12-08 02:35:34 +0000 UTC
