Harem House Chapter 25
Added 2024-03-30 12:04:01 +0000 UTC“Arty?” Lynn’s voice called out from somewhere
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There's hints of that here, admittedly, but we'll see some of it in action soon.
S. E. Aeghann
2024-04-06 17:49:16 +0000 UTCLoving the progress!!! Would love to see more of Kelly managing the group as the mistress and the girls submitting to her.
Bruce W
2024-04-06 17:47:43 +0000 UTCI agree. After reading through it again, there is so much that has been ... changed (I don't want to throw the "improved" word for something that was good to begin with) that flows well and provides more context around issues the family is facing.
David (Dobie) Gillis
2024-03-31 17:04:04 +0000 UTCAs a Tolkien fan I really appreciated it. And the additional work talking to the mom much improved!
John Henry
2024-03-30 22:45:00 +0000 UTC
