Character Concept - Horsegirl Demi-Djinn
Added 2019-05-10 13:32:00 +0000 UTC
It's about dang time I showed you guys this character~! >3< She has been in concept since chapter 2 of Lamedh, but I never revealed her because she wouldn't factor into the comic for a long time~! But I'm sick of keeping her secret for no reason~! (Well, the reason was I couldn't draw horsecocks well enough... u3u)
So, she doesn't have a name yet, but she is a human-djinn hybrid~! (Sometimes called a "demi-djinn" or an "indigo") What the fuck is a djinn, you ask? Well, I can't answer that in the context of my story without spoiling too much~! But in real-world mythology, djinns were the 2nd species that YHWH created, after the angels~ ^u^ (That might be different in my story, but I'm not sure, it's still in development~!) My djinn will tend to have animal-esque features, this chick obviously has a bit of horse~! But yeah, this is how I can justify any beastgirls in my comic~! ^wwwww^. Djinns are gonna be kinda rare, they were mostly exterminated and chased off of corporeal Earth. Djinns are notable because they are astral beings that are not beholden to Celestial Energy, so most do not work for YHWH or prey on humans. (However, there are a few Djinn that ascended to angelhood, and a few that fell from it~)
Let me know what you think of her~! She's not finalized yet, so suggestions are helpful~! ^3^ I'm not 100% on the hooves, I think I should reserve those for full celestials~ >3<
Also, I think that's my first-ever published horsecock, isn't it~!? You have no idea how many practice ones I drew... o3o I'll be seeing them in my sleep~~~
EDITS!
Thanks for all the feedback and input, guys~!! ^3^ I'm so glad you like her~!! I made some modifications to her and factored some of your ideas in~!:
I removed her hooves and gave her some hoof-like platforms instead~! ^3^ I know some of you liked the hooves, but it's not very consistent with my world-building for a half-human to have them~ >3<
Also, I tried an alternate style of horsecock~ >3< Because apparently I need more practice with them~! This one is less flared, what do you guys think?
And also also~ Here's her in her signature pants! ^3^ I envision her with an athletic fashion style~! (In case you can't tell, she works out a little~)
EDIT:
Ok, trying again~! >3< Thanks for all the feedback, guys~ You sure know your horse dongs~ >3< LOL~! Let's see if this does the trick~:
One more EDIT:
Here's a flaccid version, too~! Because why not~! >3<
I lied, more EDITS~!
The next panel of the comic is a BITCH to draw... so I took a break from failing at it to whip up some more horsegirl~! This is a sketch of her backside: (Maybe i'll shade it some day, but I really just wanted to figure out her tail~)
And here is my current idea about her full outfit~! (Sorry, not shaded~!) She is very sporty: gym shorts over jock strap, baseball jersey over sports bra, braided hair, and basketball shoes~! She's supposed to be very confident and practised at being a dickgirl, probably one of the only futa chicks who's not having wardrobe malfunctions during sports~! She is very athletic and terrifyingly agile~! I'm so glad you guys like her, sorry that she has no name yet!! >3<
Event more EDITs~ o3o
I had an epiphany~! What if she was a roller derby chick~? o333o!!
Comments
Thanks for the update. I hope in the future we can see her in her "default" form, before absorbing so much celestial energy and getting so ridiculously thick.
2019-05-28 08:11:40 +0000 UTCEquinae
ZekeStaright
2019-05-18 08:31:10 +0000 UTCI'd even settle for one to share.
2019-05-18 01:52:30 +0000 UTCName her clover
triforcem_ck
2019-05-17 14:16:13 +0000 UTCNow i really want one all my own....
Silver Twirl
2019-05-17 13:43:37 +0000 UTCThank you~! She is supposed to be half-human so that was the intent~ But it was good practice to go extra-horsey with it~ I'll probably split the difference between #1 and #3 next time I do her ^u^
Linty
2019-05-13 13:17:16 +0000 UTCThank you~! Yeah, it can probably retract a bit more, but not all the way like a horse~ She's gotta have that gym-shorts bulge~ >w< It's no fun if running with that sausage is easy for her~! >w<
Linty
2019-05-13 13:11:38 +0000 UTCPersonally, I liked the original penis design best. I thought it struck the perfect balance between human/animal hybrid.
2019-05-13 08:46:36 +0000 UTCOooh, that one's *very* pretty! Lovely work! On the flaccid side, have you considered having her fully sheathed, with just the very tip of her cock showing from between the folds of skin around the base of it, with the rest of the cock withdrawn fully within her body? I like the fully sheathed look because it's tidy and because it's so much of a contrast to the fully erect beast, but there's other elements, like having a little bit of negative space in her crotch for musk and pre-cum to collect, that I'm sure will meet the approval of other patrons :p In any event, thanks for going the extra mile on her, she's looking great!
aabsurdity
2019-05-13 03:23:37 +0000 UTCThat does look a lot nicer. Kudos.
Someguy987
2019-05-13 02:55:01 +0000 UTCYay~! ^3^ I would if I could~!!
Linty
2019-05-13 02:49:53 +0000 UTCOk now that head looks horsey! That's fantastic Linty! Can you send us one irl now? :)
2019-05-13 02:23:34 +0000 UTCWho doesn't?
2019-05-13 02:23:15 +0000 UTCI want one....
Silver Twirl
2019-05-13 02:22:32 +0000 UTCI agree with this. Needs that big "flare" that horse cocks have. It's getting closer, but still not quite there. Something that when she's as deep as she can be flares up and locks her in!
2019-05-12 17:16:36 +0000 UTCI'll be sad to see the hooves go. I'm a big fan of all kinds of nonhuman feet. For horsecock... Something like the original, with the round "tip" of the head being flattened off would be my recommendation. Perhaps but cliché, but I always say kevinsano draws them best, so maybe look at those for influence? The wobbly, unfocused style of the alternative horsecock is one of I've seen around and it's strongly *not* my preference.
aabsurdity
2019-05-12 16:52:59 +0000 UTCAnd that was the end of Someguy987~!
Linty
2019-05-12 16:38:21 +0000 UTCThese are all great, but I'm going to edit the hooves onto them, and there's nothing you can do about it
Ghostflame
2019-05-12 16:36:57 +0000 UTCSo long as she sits on my face, I am content.
Someguy987
2019-05-12 16:25:52 +0000 UTCI like her, the only criticism I have is that the balls could be bigger in comparison to the dick (that's just my own personal preference though). You draw a mighty fine horsecock and those thighs are so perfectly thick.
Anon Y. Mous
2019-05-12 06:38:58 +0000 UTCI love everything about this 😍😍
2019-05-11 03:12:21 +0000 UTCI think the head needs more of a flare to it. Feels a bit too human like an apple headed dong or something :3
2019-05-10 23:17:18 +0000 UTCI like her, can't wait to see what other Djinn come next. Hope to see a cow girl with some super tits
ZekeStaright
2019-05-10 22:14:05 +0000 UTCHorse dongs and horse thighs belong together~!
Linty
2019-05-10 18:34:44 +0000 UTCYeahhh.. this is probably not her base state~! The idea is that Celestial Energy hits her hardest in the thighs/ass, so she grows disproportionally bottom-heavy~! But yeah, she probably has more normal human proportions when she's not energized~
Linty
2019-05-10 15:43:10 +0000 UTCLooks good. Though personally I think the hips should be a bit thinner. Going a bit too far into the "hyper" size range for my taste, in that her proportions seem mismatched. Just my preference though.
2019-05-10 14:53:38 +0000 UTCGod damn, girl does her squats
Someguy987
2019-05-10 14:08:45 +0000 UTCA musclegirl whose calves are the size of her torso (to say nothing of her thighs), packing a cock like a tree? You're going to give me a heart attack! I don't have any *appropriate* suggestions, except maybe bigger balls. And I love the hooves; they really make her stand out.
Ghostflame
2019-05-10 13:55:17 +0000 UTCHorse dicks and thicc thighs are divine!!
Silver Twirl
2019-05-10 13:36:14 +0000 UTCIt's what I've always wanted, Linty. Please, more horse dick girls... <3
Iliara_Kantira
2019-05-10 13:34:27 +0000 UTC
