The RA, Ch. 11-12
Added 2022-08-22 18:10:43 +0000 UTCAll right, gang! We have the final two chapters here of volume 1 of The RA. There are a handful of areas where I'm not sure I love the execution, so don't be surprised if in the final copy I've done some substantial revisions. The meat of it is there, though. If you have particular thoughts, feel free to share. (Or if you love it as is and think I'm a once-in-a-generation erotica wunderkind, say that instead!) I broke it up into two chapters once I realized how big it had gotten, and what a convenient break point there was.
With so many commissions on my plate at the moment (yay!) I'll be taking my time editing this bit by bit instead of all at once like I usually do with large works like this. I'm thinking I'd like to add a floor plan and a roster, too, since folks who don't have access to The RA Notes and the (updated) photo collage of Higgins Hotties still have a relatively easy time of keeping tabs on the sprawling cast. While we wind up with a smaller group with more defined personalities, it's a lot of names and traits to track.
I hope you enjoy, and more to come! Happy Monday.
Comments
I can't say I'm surprised to see you've hit it out of the park yet again. Ice Bear's just out here wrecking the curve for every other author. Fantastic story, can't wait for more.
Mr. Snrub
2022-08-24 00:01:54 +0000 UTCI'm sure I've mentioned this before, but I genuinely hope Spencer's level of genre awareness never progresses beyond Hilariously Incorrect. I love him looking at a room of territorial girls and thinking That's Weird. I love him getting questioned over his likes, dislikes, fetishes and sexual history, and thinking Why Are They Teasing Me. I love him getting maternal support from his hot MILF boss and thinking Why Is She Embarrassing Me. I love him getting apologetic praise from three dozen dutiful hotties and thinking I'm Fucking Great At My Job. I love him showering in-between two hot girls who start masturbating as soon as they know he's there and thinking What A Sex Positive Environment I've Fostered. What a great book this has become. Be proud of your work!
WDB
2022-08-22 23:59:19 +0000 UTC"It's just a prank!" -Spencer, mid-orgy in Book 2, probably
WDB
2022-08-22 23:53:35 +0000 UTC
