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Added 2024-05-20 06:09:36 +0000 UTCIts always complicated to work on a heavy dialog page. The strugle between adding more dialogs to one page or adding more pages to space the dialogs, but it also can be used to convey chaos or a fast paced moment, make the reader unconfortable or overwelmed by putting it in the shoes of the characters in a moment where too much is happening
Comments
Surprised Ambar didn't just embrace the more compact, ball-less look - considering she explained to Duke how she doesn't care about that part of her (in 3-17).
Veydajar
2024-08-15 16:47:19 +0000 UTCyou are awesome ^-^
Ben Bauer
2024-05-22 23:19:49 +0000 UTCThank you! That means a lot to me. I really try to take my time to do it as best I can.
Zorro Re
2024-05-21 12:49:45 +0000 UTCUsually Calheb helps me with that. Please let me know any mistake so I can fix it ^^
Zorro Re
2024-05-21 12:49:06 +0000 UTCthis story is so well written ^-^
Ben Bauer
2024-05-21 11:30:24 +0000 UTCSo I note some consistent grammatical errors across the comic, ever have anyone offer to clean it up? I'd be happy to.
Copper
2024-05-20 21:32:23 +0000 UTCI think you balance the dialogue really well, especially in these moments where you get a glimpse of what's going on beneath the surface. I'm really impressed by the way you use the movement and storytelling and how the dialogue and body language makes it clear that Alan is here as friend as much as Director. Beautiful work.
Deadhorse
2024-05-20 13:29:22 +0000 UTCIf you know how scaredy Ambar is and her reactions, you know what that liquid is ^^
Zorro Re
2024-05-20 12:42:40 +0000 UTCThat wet spot looks pretty suspicious. All jokes aside, loving how she's still thinking of others before herself, but girl you need to rest and recover. Listen to Alan and heal up a bit more before you try to go back out.
Amber Dawn
2024-05-20 12:35:45 +0000 UTCHe was so stressed by what he couldn´t do, that he forgot everything he actually did ^^
Zorro Re
2024-05-20 10:44:19 +0000 UTCI loved how she made the Doc smile with just one comment.
Olaf
2024-05-20 08:26:53 +0000 UTC
