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Added 2023-09-27 12:55:49 +0000 UTC
Comments
Really fantastic work on those callbacks, and how the nurse's jealousy blinded her in part to what was going on. I really love the way you have our good sciencegirl's realization, too, and how it all comes together here. Someone is going to end up getting fired over this. But really love the way you brought this all together. You did really well showing the other side of the story here and it helps tie the story into one piece. I'm really impressed by your storytelling and the way you keep up that realism in the characters.
Deadhorse
2023-10-01 13:41:45 +0000 UTCHis presence forces her to conceal what she knows.
want7000
2023-09-27 23:36:18 +0000 UTCBig girl needs some special attention
Zynder Dragyn
2023-09-27 14:03:32 +0000 UTCOh bb please.
Damaronwolf
2023-09-27 13:41:31 +0000 UTC
