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Added 2023-04-19 12:31:18 +0000 UTC
Comments
These are some really well done reveals; I love the way you use the talk and monologue to emphasize the showing you're doing through the image, and how it really helps show off his personality as well as the obvious pride he's taken in his work and designs. I like what you reveal pushed him over the edge, too; the invasion of what he feels was his privacy and territory, rather than ever seeing her as any kind of threat. I'm super excited to see how this continues!
Deadhorse
2023-04-20 13:34:49 +0000 UTCAmbar is prepared, see a few pages back about the activated feature of her bed regarding "earthquake-avoidance"
Olaf
2023-04-19 20:12:17 +0000 UTCLooks like she's in for another round~
Rian Hines
2023-04-19 13:59:51 +0000 UTC
