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Added 2022-10-24 04:18:55 +0000 UTC
Comments
That moment of vulnerability hits really hard, especially with the way you frame it and how she's reaching out of the frame. You do such a wonderful job with body language that it tells the story by itself as you look from frame-to-frame, and that's really impressive and adds a lot of power to your narrative. Great job with pacing too, and avoiding lingering too long on the sequence with the girls and instead bringing things back to Ambar, and her ongoing recovery.
Deadhorse
2022-10-24 21:13:51 +0000 UTCYeap, and yeap ^^
Zorro Re
2022-10-24 18:52:54 +0000 UTCWill we see more of Marty? And the camera, I assume, should be infrared as well.
IceTigerV
2022-10-24 17:34:36 +0000 UTCIf Marty is still a teen, I really wonder how he got the job. Nurses require 3-4 years of training normally. In some cases it is a bachelor degree. That red light from the camera gives of serious 2001 vibes.
Olaf
2022-10-24 05:51:25 +0000 UTCAwwr, he's a sweet fella, better not use that against them tho! But of course she'd rather project happiness, moping around all day won't help
Eli (PapaDwaggy)
2022-10-24 04:55:41 +0000 UTC
