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Added 2022-02-07 01:00:16 +0000 UTCFinally, another chapter done. This took a while, so many problems and bad luck. but finally done!
Comments
It's lovely to see Ambar back in the world of the living; I really admire how smoothly you moved things forwards, bringing her back into the story and passing time in the same moment. That's really really well done and I love that it doesn't just feel like "plot device." I really admire the way that you made us feel so much for her, too. The connection you've helped us all establish with your character through your art and story and the how important she is, while always keeping up the thrills and sex. You intertwine eroticism and plot really well, and I admire that a lot, the way you bring and use sex and sexuality as story devices and even to build relationships with character, rather than purely fan-service or as something separate. Beautifully done.
Deadhorse
2022-02-07 14:45:45 +0000 UTCOur girlfriend is back and you’re gonna be in trouble! Hey la hey la our girlfriends back!
Damaronwolf
2022-02-07 13:59:49 +0000 UTCFirst: While Ambar’s body, that thick bottom, plush hips and cute smile, were a sight to behold, her real beauty came from within. I’d say she has a heart of gold, but gold doesn’t seem precious enough to compare it to Ambar. Second: That lovely and very voluptuous young lady nurse, hot damn! Those nipples and areola got my attention! Third: She regains consciousness just to give a great oneliner like a classic 80’s action movie character. That’s freaking awesome! My hats off to you good sir! Bravo! Well done!
Tomcattweek01
2022-02-07 08:44:25 +0000 UTCAnd no visitors at all ? That is sad, not even Cassie or the chief ?
Olaf
2022-02-07 08:19:46 +0000 UTCI imagine her voice to sound now like Shohreh Aghdashloo's.
Olaf
2022-02-07 07:38:14 +0000 UTClove the nurse ;-) really great story as always
Loupy
2022-02-07 07:16:36 +0000 UTCIndeed!
Zorro Re
2022-02-07 03:37:45 +0000 UTCYou know, that little car deserves a medal.
DC_OZ
2022-02-07 03:21:29 +0000 UTCWhen the gentle people get angry.... the Devil runs in fear
Zorro Re
2022-02-07 02:16:58 +0000 UTCThey made a horrible mistake They angered the cute one NEVER anger the cute one
Amber Dawn
2022-02-07 02:10:20 +0000 UTC*giggle* thankies *^^* but the nurse is making a a before and after, since she is not pretty anymore
Zorro Re
2022-02-07 01:48:29 +0000 UTCThose are 3d printed casts
Zorro Re
2022-02-07 01:47:24 +0000 UTCThese nets around her mouth are these there to stabelise her?
Ancario
2022-02-07 01:31:56 +0000 UTC“I remember she was really pretty for a faggot.” Almost all the faggots in are hot. Lol even straight guys popping boners. 😂
Bullet Bullseye
2022-02-07 01:20:16 +0000 UTCYou will ^^
Zorro Re
2022-02-07 01:11:27 +0000 UTCThat was one hell of a chapter! Kinda want to see more of that thicc nurse. 😁
MechaBlerd
2022-02-07 01:06:32 +0000 UTCShe came back to make a pun... She is all right =P
Zorro Re
2022-02-07 01:06:25 +0000 UTCEnd of the chapter?!?! No!! I wanted to see her recovery. Dang it! Lol. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Vebril Eladriandill
2022-02-07 01:04:32 +0000 UTC
