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Added 2022-01-29 19:10:34 +0000 UTC
Comments
I love the changing outfits and the detail in the chains, and the way they bind her. It reads so well and emotionally, it's really powerful. I really adore the way you bring life to her character and how you've given her such depth through these scenes, and how you're tackling the difficulty of showing her pain while she's comatose.
Deadhorse
2022-01-30 23:08:26 +0000 UTCYeap, its Ambar´s subconscious coma trying to cope with her loneliness and injuries
Zorro Re
2022-01-30 00:28:24 +0000 UTCI’m assuming this is a young Ambar? Are we seeing some of her memories or subconscious thoughts? It breaks my heart seeing her being treated in such a manner. She is such a sweetheart and always so kind why would, how could anyone be so cruel to her. If I could help her I would with out a second thought. 🥺😢
Tomcattweek01
2022-01-29 20:42:24 +0000 UTCAwe poor puppy
Zawkian Puppy
2022-01-29 19:13:47 +0000 UTC
