Exciting scene! Interesting how flipping the image completely changes the dynamic. The way you have it, I thought they were ambushing the reptile; only when I saw the flipped way, did i realize they are defending their room against him. Maybe I parse them left-to-right as "actor; subject"? I wonder if regular right-to-left readers get a different feeling of dynamics from them.
The lizard's gun looked at first glance like it was firing through the wall, but then I realized what I thought was a gun-blast was a suppressor lining up with the gap between elbow and dado rail on the wall. Color will make that a lot clearer ;)
Dewi
2020-01-10 17:29:03 +0000 UTC
yeap. Already working on it ^^
Zorro Re
2020-01-10 08:47:24 +0000 UTC
are you going to put this in color
LordDragon
2020-01-10 08:10:03 +0000 UTC
If the concealed one fires, it's gonna be so messy~