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How would you like the fucktoy route to end?

The end is nigh...

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she goes full bimbo tattooed slut

7h3 Unkn0wn

The end of the story needs to feel like the end is a "good" thing for the character. So maybe her parents and church friends come and offer to stay in town and support her. That and have her make a decision to give a portion of her earnings to the homeless( many of whom she regularly fucks). Something to incorporate elements of her moral/religious/familial life with her fucktoy life in a sympathetic light.

Thomas Dobbs

Would add something: the regular sexscenes are not really interesting even the rough ones. The interesting thing is psycology, helplesness, vulnurability, being handled like anyones toy. Everyone in the village should loose respect for her at all. And treaat her like a candy whoes opinion does not matteer at all, even if she asks for help people should help the opposite site :) And at the end the only person she could trust should betray her into complete slavery or somthing like that (but use her good before that, pretending to help).

Dmitry Vilkov

Wouldn't want it to end :)) Maybe something like a cage for a club pet, during evenings... With toilet works for the customers as punishement... Chained to the wall during the afternoons to attract customeres and "physical" ecersises/advertisement at mornings... So the whole village could try her services before coming to the club, or something like that.

Dmitry Vilkov

Maybe she ends up meeting up with the old lady and her son from the beginning and she ends up waking up there and realizes all that's happened to her was just a dream. Maybe re-introduce her to her parents being alive after all. She can on that path go back home to complete the cycle. The other path could lead Lily where she not only follows the path Mando81 described below but has a violent and kinky reunion of sorts with the old lady and her son prior to the ending scene. She ends up back at the old lady's house because of a power play made over who runs the operations at the club and elsewhere. Lily is caught in the middle based on loyalty.

Mark Schierbecker

Haha I like to surprise people!

Eromantis

I honestly like to be suprised

hypnojoe

I like it, it's cinematic, images form in my head when I read it

Eromantis

Something along the lines of her parents. It could even time-skip a few months and have texts saying Lily's fucked too many dicks to think of. She’s on the street corner, and the policeman drives past, noticing her. As he approaches her, he smiles. He says, 'Look what you’ve become.' Without a thought, Lily responds with the price for sex. He laughs and accepts. They have sex in the motel and after sex. As he’s cleaning himself up. The policeman tells her that “your parents have contacted me, and they are alive. Would you like me to respond?” Lily replies with, “Oh, them. It’s best if they don’t know. Would you like round 2? With a corrupted smile and cut to black, the end.

Mando81

I adore the way you've written it. About the toy and box. Very very poetic!

Eromantis

As this isn't my chosen route, I'm neutral about the ending. I hope players who enjoy this route end up liking it 😉👍. Remember, though, that when you've finished playing with a toy, you should put it back in its box. If you're not going to use it anymore, it's best to donate it to someone who actually wants to play with it 😈🎈.

PickerPatron

Who said there won't be a second scene with the VIP? ;)

Eromantis

Honestly, I’m a bit disappointed that the toy-route is already over. Until the very end, I was hoping for a second scene with the VIP. I imagined him disciplining Lily with the help of her club friends — whips, restraints, and whatever else fit the mood. And when Lily finally begs the VIP to finish what she had interrupted earlier, he decides the punishment was enough. Without saying a word, he returns to exactly where he left off during the first attempt — this time without any lubricant…

Sid302

Leading into sub routes. Like she becomes a slave or a pornstar, and in the end, she signs a contract.

Kai Grijalva

Goldberg orders Lily to go to a specific address to service a client. When she arrives, it turns out the client is a handsome young man Lily immediately finds attractive. He has a special outfit prepared for her, along with a blindfold. Dressed as instructed, she is led into another room. Inside are two older women and two men, but Lily can’t see any of them — her eyes are covered. The young man gives Lily rough, unquestionable instructions, guiding her every move. The rest is left to the imagination… I’ll only add that Lily never learns who exactly was in the room, and the young man is merely an assistant — he never even touches her, no matter how much she wishes he would. He simply pays the agreed rate and tells her that next time she should put in even more effort.

Sid302


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