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Gambler Chapter 24: Forbidden Softness

MHA Gambler's Guide to Heroism

Chapter 24: Forbidden Softness

Hey guys, Bronz here, I decided to try out a new viewing site for my chapters thanks to the help of my brother for a better viewing experience. I'd love to hear your thoughts and feedback about it so let me know.

https://www.deckreader.com/chapters/gambler24

Google Docs(No Images):

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZM8Bj8LITO2SMTqC0mNsWFk0HjtTM9Em6GhB_IAa1rU/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

Good choice using Deck Reader, Mr. Bronz. It feels far better to read on phone especially than trying to read Google docs on phone. You have done well with that; and the chapter is exquisite as always.

Uudles

Momo is such a sweet and cute girl. Honestly she deserves more praise! Also the new site is awesome!

SaffireSpirit13

Love the new site Bronz. Solid chapter

Uzu

Like the other site it's much nicer than actually using Google docs

Jacky Chen

Pretty good, for some reason Momo doesn't get much attention in many stories or if she does she's kinda one dimensional and boring

Son-Of-Scorn

Like the new site and like the chapter, bro.

AceDA

I like this new website

Jaded

Ok, as for the viewing site I really like it. Much cleaner looking than google docs and the customization is really nice. Though for the fonts only the first 3 really work. Other than that great site. Would love to see you use it in the future. As for Momo like i said, best girl. Always adored her and screw Horikoshi for leaving her in the dumps. Really next time they have a little nsfw moment Hakari should just pull a kabedon or something like that and just say that he wants her. I bet Momo is a sucker for romance novels and her heart would skip a beat. And we need Momoism and Toganium together for maximum roles. Also I won’t go over everything from my last comment but I really do think that if Hakari gets and Tinker abilities then they should be reserved for Momo, Mei and Melissa. I know Mei and Melissa aren’t in the works right now as love interests considering your AO3 page and if they aren’t in your plans then I get it (even though I adore Melissa just as much as Momo) but back to the point. Hakari is just really straightforward and I don’t see him wanting to dedicate time in making things rather than training, fucking, and gambling. So those types of abilities would really be best suited for Momo and increase her creation kit by miles. She would also need an increase in her reserves but the best way to increase her power is to just give her more options. All that said, loved the chapter! Can’t wait until the Momo is fully Momoed! Have a great day Bronz!

Loghead101

I like this other website

Warren

More Momo’s please :v

Maleficarum


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