Gambler Chapter 23: Big… Hospitalities
Added 2025-09-30 19:17:10 +0000 UTCMHA Gambler's Guide to Heroism Chapter 23: Big… Hospitalities
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You know, in all my years of reading MHA fanfiction, I don't think I've seen someone actually address that Momo’s costume is impractical because it's sexy in the wrong way before. Usually, it's either unchanged or the topic gets to varying levels of pearl-clutching depending on the writer. No diss to them, I like a lot of those fics, but still.
AceDA
2025-10-01 23:59:02 +0000 UTCThe suit would tear as its pushing a heavier object as its getting pulled out, you think Momo's parent's aren't rich enough have looked for a workaround?
BronzDeck
2025-10-01 04:56:31 +0000 UTCThat would require her to memorize a blueprint that probably has more information than the human brain can memorize 10x over. You have to remember she has to keep a book with her to remember some things she makes. She wouldn't be able to make such a thing if you gave her a 100 years.
BronzDeck
2025-10-01 04:55:27 +0000 UTCI read a fic once that had momo memorize the specs for an iron-man esque suit and would eject it over her entire body. Any time a piece was damaged it would shoot off and be replaced right away. Can't remember the story name though.
dragongod0117
2025-10-01 02:22:37 +0000 UTCI see you added pics again and made a workout. Great work as always Bronz
Uzu
2025-10-01 00:53:51 +0000 UTCThey should have just made Momo a suit like Lemillion so she can create objects while being fully covered
Julian Rivera
2025-09-30 22:14:48 +0000 UTCHaving go-to reflexive picks instead of having to come up with stuff mid-fight is a pretty good idea.
RJKY
2025-09-30 21:12:42 +0000 UTCI understand that tear gas would be restricted but I don't think things like ammonia are. Diluted ammonia would be a great tool for temporarily blinding an opponent and would also interfere with their sense of smell. Or you could even do pure capsaicin mixed with some cooking oil for a basic pepper spray, it would work great with the ninja egg thing too.
Isunavailable (Jeremiah)
2025-09-30 20:26:16 +0000 UTCWith Momo, the best thing that you could do for her is to be able to get her on all forms of entertainment. Take inspiration from just about everything you can find in order to build up her tool base fighting style early. Naruto would be a great source to get her started, but then you can move onto other things. First get her certified in weapons training for firearms as well as support item creation would definitely go a long way into improving her repertoire. Depending how far you want to take it she could be that ninja character able to throw everything in the fridge at her opponent. Or if Hakari ends up getting any Tinker abilities and decides to give them to her, then she could become a walking apocalyptic armory on steroids. Anyways, Momo is my favorite girl out of all of MHA and screw Horikoshi for never realizing her potential anything that can turn her into the absolute queen she was meant to be is a bang up job in my book great chapter man, as always and can’t wait for more!
Loghead101
2025-09-30 19:58:31 +0000 UTCI rather enjoyed the banter between Hakari and the guards. At least he kept his cool and didn't force a scene, but I don't think he made friends with Mas. Changing Momo to where she is actually able to fight properly instead of needing to be defended as she makes some huge or complicated thing is a pretty good idea. You are letting her become a more versatile fighter and help her not make an ass of herself in the sports festival. I think it's a good direction for her.
Colin Peden
2025-09-30 19:41:55 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Romero
2025-09-30 19:21:51 +0000 UTC
