Gambler Chapter 22: I See Me
Added 2025-09-29 10:01:25 +0000 UTCMHA Gambler's Guide to Heroism
Chapter 22: I See Me
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DnD advantage, it rolls twice and picks the desired result between the offered choices. Does not modify the rarity at all.
BronzDeck
2025-09-29 17:47:03 +0000 UTCYes, but the world is not yet ready for such power
BronzDeck
2025-09-29 17:46:39 +0000 UTCCan Torunite alloy with Toganium?
RJKY
2025-09-29 17:44:58 +0000 UTCExcellent chapter as always, Mr. Bronz. I have been meaning to ask but what might be the roll values of the Advantage Tickets inside of the Chaos Gacha? Is it a 1.0 increase? A .5? Or do I simply just roll two like you would in D&D and pick the better option?
Uudles
2025-09-29 16:35:00 +0000 UTCMy OCD appreciates the centered text. I also love how u tend to give toru the spotlight more often. Definitely can agree she deserved more screentime.
Jacob Faircloth
2025-09-29 13:51:27 +0000 UTCI liked the central and colored text. Felt more isolated and different from the regular text. Which fits with the whole words of chaos. Thx for the chapter
Sage Berthelsen
2025-09-29 11:31:59 +0000 UTCPerhaps I worded it strangely? I mean it's logical from their standpoint and the fact that Hero's Reward is helping it along. I mention him interacting with them in the background. Sometimes I have to move things along with pacing. She doesn't want his babies or marry him right now but is very aware of him romantically.
BronzDeck
2025-09-29 10:42:00 +0000 UTCAgreeing with the other comment, I enjoy your writing but the problem I have with the 'romance' is 20 different girls all falling in love with the same guy over like, two chapters of interaction. He drew her, she LOVES him now?.. They've hardly interacted. I'd probably enjoy this a lot more with less pairings and more fleshed out interactions, it all boils down to the same thing in the end anyways. I think the cheap romance takes away from a lot of what I enjoy in these stories, but I do still enjoy them a lot in the end.
gigamans
2025-09-29 10:39:21 +0000 UTCIt's difficult because her quirk is a mutation quirk and not something that can be simply turned off, it can be overwhelmed by not turned off.
BronzDeck
2025-09-29 10:38:55 +0000 UTCHe has the trait Hero's Reward, he is handsome and they are hormonal. It takes very much less than to completely change someone's life to get them to fall in love with you in real life.
BronzDeck
2025-09-29 10:37:50 +0000 UTCI loved the way that Toru interacted with him for the painting. Is there some way that he could get with the folks at the support department to try and see if a suit could be made that reverses her quirk? Or have Izawa use his quirk and cancel hers, so a picture could be taken? I never have understood why that was never tried in the series, nor by other authors. As for the centered lines, I personally like them. The notifications being centered helps with a very clear distinction. It was obvious before, but the centered lines make it simpler, at least for me. I usually add a voice over in my head for the notifications, centered makes it easy to know when to stop the voice over. ππ
Colin Peden
2025-09-29 10:36:02 +0000 UTCReally cliche I enjoyed it but I don't get why every author does something like this with Toru, and she fell in love far too quickly that's just ridiculous and unrealistic even for a story like this
Son-Of-Scorn
2025-09-29 10:08:36 +0000 UTC
