The Alien Gun - Part 1 (Female Bodysuit Erotica)
Added 2018-10-22 21:21:04 +0000 UTCHere is my next story. It's a short story I wrote about a person having a little fun with a bodysuit-creating gun.
Total words: 5,000 (14 pages)
Let me know what you think about it. Did you enjoy it? Is there anything you disliked about it or wished I included (or didn't include)? Was it exciting and interesting or just ok? Was it detailed enough or could it use more details and more descriptions?
Feel free to give me feedback on it anytime.
Thank you again. I hope to have another story out within a week.
Comments
That would be fun. Maybe I should expand on the story some more. Keep writing in it. :)
Nikki L. Falcon
2018-10-24 20:26:22 +0000 UTCCant wait to see part two and see what people takes over and whos knows maybe he decideds to stay in one and would nice to see how he act taking over a married woman seeing what its like
Death2cu
2018-10-24 17:45:24 +0000 UTCAh, good idea. Maybe it was a bit short. But I like your ideas. I can imagine him taking it out to a nearby mall or strip club and trying it out a little bit longer. ;)
Nikki L. Falcon
2018-10-23 20:21:45 +0000 UTC
