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Turais - Traveller 27 - Return to the Party

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Turais - Traveller 27 - Return to the Party

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Also, a little tangent about Maggie having to deal with the consequences of what she's done interesting, I feel I glossed over the point a little too much. I still ship Fin & Maggie together, their feelings are very pure and it is beautiful. Now their relationship is soiled, true, but that's how life goes sometimes. I'd like for them to deal with this in an adult-like manner, ultimately. Their relationship might never be the same, but I'd be sad if bridges are burnt forever over this misstep. And in my mind it is the road there that I'd qualify as "entertaining". Also, mixing pure feelings & "sinful" behavior in a balanced way is very arousing in itself for me.

Roland Taranis

I should also re-read to be sure, but as far as I can remember, from Fin's pov, he tripped on a spider thread.

Roland Taranis

I'm going to have to go back and reread. Was Finn pushed in the hole by some of the people he was with? Or was Finn pulled down by one of the spider threads? Maybe he did actually fall. going to have to reread the chapter where he fell to make sure?

Jane Hexum

I don't find myself rooting for Malik yet, there's too much old blood and still much to prove, but I will admit that his behavior has been acceptable lately, since he didn't "cheat" his way into Maggie's pants. The situation became interestingly complicated very quick. Maggie fucked up big time in trying to secure a compromise that early that way, and seeing her deal with those consequences will be very entertaining. A joy to see Malik sweat, confronted to a situation he is painfully aware he won't be able to sly his way out of. I'm interested to see what kind of overture he will have to concede to Fin in order not to aggravate him, which would in turn entice Dryda to end the green bastard on the spot... Maybe, as the cosmic irony would let me hope, he will have to do the exact opposite of what he always does, help fortifying Fin and bring him back on his feet, hopefully without a Trojan brainworm... I think Fin & Malik could make very decent (and contrasted) partners if their relationship is "sane" and honest enough. I do hope Dryda was genuine in what she expressed in the earlier chapters, since Fin seems to have been pushed into the hole, as Maggie was about to say before being shut down.

Roland Taranis

Zenon Is still my favorite and they must be protected. :3

Jane Hexum

Malik continues to be a well behaved and respectable guy.

FlorfGlorf

I'm rooting for Yandere Spider and Fin too.

Jane Hexum

Honestly a really great chapter. I find myself rooting for M&M Honestly, I think they're kinda cute together.

Jane Hexum


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