Naruto's Sexy Techniques - Chapter 3
Added 2024-08-12 22:59:10 +0000 UTC
Comments
That's good advice. I'll adjust my approach.
Tanya Wormald
2024-08-15 23:39:07 +0000 UTCOkay, that makes things a bit clearer 😁 I do think this inner dilemma would deserve a touch more nuance in Naruto's response, for example in contrasting body language and words. I'd picture the stubbornness mixing with the brattiness for more external questions, but a pitch perfect poker face suits him ill in my opinion 😉
Roland Taranis
2024-08-15 23:27:38 +0000 UTCI think I meant to write it as stubborn, if I know the parts we're referring to. But it may have come off as distant if I wrote it poorly. Basically, the way I'm trying to Write Naruto here exsentuates a certain struggle written into the request while also mainly focusing on his dominant qualities in the show. Perserverence, but also impatience and stubbornness as well as a brattiness.
Tanya Wormald
2024-08-15 21:20:29 +0000 UTCRefreshing read as always, the touch of slapstick comedy alone is enough to warrant the interest (same goes for the Kara x Teuta series 😉) Naruto always was a bratty character, even if that trait of his never was my favourite 😅 However, the "indifferent" side he shows here I cannot recall, nor can I really see how it mingles with the rest of his character 🤔 I suppose I'll have to wait for the following chapters to offer me some context 😉
Roland Taranis
2024-08-13 15:17:17 +0000 UTC
