The End of Kayo

depend on the owner, i gave this OC to my friend

Rou

Do you plan on using Kayo again for a future work?

yus, actually random things i draw and i actually gave her name xD

Rou

Is Kayo your OC?

rw

i might, but maybe in simpler form

Rou

Personally I think it's a great ending! The building panic throughout the last few pages is well done, and I think the panels leave enough to the imagination, especially the first two here. I may be biased in that it's rare to see just a straight up, slowly built up drowning, no monsters or sex involved, and I tend to like those the most, so take that for what it's worth. Will you do other long-form comics like this in the future? The anticipation waiting on the next page, not knowing what would happen next, was fun.

Nerine (fltwad)

Sounds interesting with the second girl, because the story with Kayo looks a little bit unfinished. However, from the point of view of drawing it is difficult and time-consuming (script, detail, perspective and shading), from Rou's point of view it is long and unprofitable to do it. He'd better make a few small art for normal money than big series like that.

NekoTuna

I do see your point and I don't blame them for wanting more it's one of your best works yet. But are you planning on making more of them like this or just single pieces of artworks. I just thought of a scenario where another girl would go in the labyrinth after kayo and find her lifeless body floating there as a easter egg or something XD. She would probably share the same fate.

dio

sorry but i can't.. people will beg for more and more if i keep going on this...

Rou

would you be willing to add more panels if i payed extra XD

dio

This series was really good. But I'm really begging you dude could u add one more panel of her laying on her back with some of those jiggle physics and bubbles exploding out of her mouth would be amazing.

dio

Hmm, are the 2 panels at the end of Kayo 8 ultimately irrelevant? Seems odd to focus 2 panels on that.

She shoulda rubbed one out before she blacked out :D

seawolf03

Wonderful one. However, I do not feel it is over, her lungs are not full of water and it is not visible that she feels pain from the water - more like a loss of consciousness. And her face is almost invisible, usually they are shown in close-up at the end. So we wait for part 11 Rou XP

NekoTuna

Hehe sorry but that's it

Rou

Eh? No flailing, no trashing? Shame... But does it make this art bad? Nope) Still, I would like too see her struggle😈 P.S. You were away for quite long...

Slmuran

Awww is that really it...? Surely there's more in store.

Phantom_Shift