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New Video! Lipstick-Gate!

[updated with link to final video!]

Hi frans!

Here is the rough version of the new Moldy Lipstick & Capitalism: A Love Story video!

There are a few things we still need to fix, the color correction we only did in the first clip, and you'll notice a few notes we have to fix in VO. 

But other than that we wanted to get it to you guys, and if you have any thoughts or anything you think we should clarify further, etc, let me know!

Hope you're having a great week yall. Heads and chins up!

New Video! Lipstick-Gate!

Comments

Love it

Don Friðrik Ólafsson

I think i get what you mean! We had more stuff in the script about like “now this is how it’s supposed to be,” but usually it ended up sounding too hypothetical or abstract so we ended up cutting most of that. It’s something we are gonna keep in mind moving forward, because we want to be positive and constructive instead of just pointing at something and going “thing bad.” Thank you for the input!

Maggie Mae Fish

Loved the Margaret Thatcher impersonation, too! If it wasn't ment to be, it should!

Let me clarify. When I said you have to say something positive too, I mean that if you want to affect people, you'll have to give them the stick and the carrot. Neither of the two work as well alone. So every sentence of the sentiment "this is not how it's supposed to be" should be followed by "now this is how it's supposed to be". You can have your own rythm like 2-2-1-2 or anything, but both elements have to be there. Otherwise you are just going to disturb people and not move them.

Other than that, great job! I admire your courage! There is a fine line between being too contraversial and getting pushed into the margin, and too timid and not getting anything done. The sweet spot is somewhere in between and I'm following with a great interest as you might just have found it.

- Blaise Pascal once said: "If I had had more time, this letter would have been much shorter. Since I didn't have the time, it came out long."

- (I do not believe I'm saying this but) you should try and avoid cross-cuts betwwn Jaclyn Hill and yourself. Jaclyn has a fairly attractive looking albeit plastic face, and there just isn't enough contrast. Let your voice do the job ob this one. (Yes, I realize this is the exact opposite I said earlier)

You got to say something positive too!

I didn't know who Jaclyn Hill is but now I know. I'm totally drunk at the moment so please take this with a grain of salt. First impressions: - Bashing capitalism is a rabbit's hole unless you give an alternative. Yes, capitalism is based on greed, you are right about that. So maybe contrasting greed to ... I don't know ... fairness? Good'ol American fairness

Spotted the earrings from nowhere, before being informed they were earrings from mom. :)

I'm so excited to see this one :D

Christopher Stoll


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