Gates of Hell: Temperantia part 1
Added 2024-10-07 04:25:22 +0000 UTCI've had this in my back pocket for a little while, but I finally threw together the last few pages to get it to a stopping point. I'm trying not to neglect my projects for so long and make sure everything's getting at least some kind of update on some kind of regular-ish basis.
Anyways, I leaned into Nimis being extra emaciated here. I felt like I prettified her too much in chapter 1, when I really wanted her to look like... horrifyingly malnourished. Don't worry, she won't be THIS skinny for very long, but considering there's no sexy bits here and instead just a buncha worldbuilding, I figured I could lean into her being more horror-styled.
Comments
Love your stories! I don't think there's a story comic you have going I don't enjoy reading!
Sprutkit
2024-10-12 00:38:08 +0000 UTCIt's fun to see you channel a little Baki The Grappler into Aidos's expressions on page 9.
Iamari
2024-10-07 14:16:55 +0000 UTCIT"S BACK!!! I can indeed tell you changed things and added more pages than the last time. I think this is the third time you changed things in this chapter. The ending is still the same though. I will always love the last part the most. XD
WhiteGlint211
2024-10-07 11:34:07 +0000 UTCDon't know if you noticed but on page 8 in the bottom left panel Nimis' mosquito bites look a bit uneven.
Mars Project
2024-10-07 04:33:11 +0000 UTCVery nice. I look forward to seeing where this story goes
Soup Time
2024-10-07 04:29:36 +0000 UTC
