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TWNY DC - V2E1: First Day of School

Turns out you have to actually go to school after nearly dying.

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Taylor's initial instinct being violence and then her second instinct being self-hatred is very accurate.

Fiona

Paragender is the cutest thing I've read in a long time, Taylor is such a dork I love it. Great chapter.

Szori

Man, Taylor is going through it. I don't remember her being that negative when someone compliments her at the end of worm. Actually, I don't think anyone was complimenting her appearance at the end of worm. Poor Maggie, having to deal with such a dense baby gay. I did enjoy the way she told Yang and Weiss to handle their own issues. They're supposed to be adults. If they can't work things out, then a team leader does need to step in, but not necessarily right away. It feels like a lot of the time in RWBY fanfic other people get involved in personal stuff before it's called for.

Einar Strandberg

Love that Taylor’s an ally, even if her support is colored by her reflex to fight in crisis lmao This chapter really felt like Taylor showing her pride, stubbornness, and awkwardness/adorkability. That last line was her typical brutal negative self talk and comparing herself to others while the “paragender” comment shows that Taylor is still the dork we know and love

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