TWNY DC - V1E8: Engagement
Added 2025-02-19 20:37:52 +0000 UTCYang is in the middle of a scuffle.
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Yeah, "She landed heavily on its head, hammer wheeling about her body in a mighty blow" makes it seem like "she" is referring to Nora and her hammer specifically instead of Nora's body
Einar Strandberg
2025-02-20 07:46:28 +0000 UTCThere’s a bit about Nora landing on the Deathstalker’s head and then cracking one of the claws. It took me a couple of passes to get a picture of what happened, because the first part of that brings to mind the sequence from the show where she comes down hammer swinging onto the Deathstalker head. I think that bit could use some more detail to make it clearer that she stands on its head and swings at the claw. And I’m curious about why Taylor and the spider seem to be taking this personally.
Deadpan29
2025-02-20 03:00:31 +0000 UTC
