Chapter 228 - Vendetta
Added 2024-10-18 01:02:25 +0000 UTCSebastien
Month 9, Day 3, Friday 1:40 p.m.
Sebastien and her friends arrived at their reserved seats in the temporary amphitheatre, a grand structure of white stone drawn up from the ground for the huge crowds that came to watch the Defense exhibitions. The air buzzed with excitement as spectators filed in, their chatter filling the space. Massive mirrors, sympathetically connected to those within the test area, dominated the center of the amphitheatre. For the moment, they merely reflected the eager faces of the crowd.
Alec and Rhett peppered Damien and Sebastien with questions about Professor Lacer’s upcoming exhibition. “Come on, you must know something!” Alec pleaded. “He’s your mentor!”
“I’m as much in the dark as you are,” Sebastien admitted. Trying to be patient when everyone around her was so excited made it even harder.
Damien kept adjusting his collar and sleeve cuffs, fidgeting restlessly. “He hasn’t dropped even the slightest hint. I think he enjoys the suspense.”
“Maybe he’s come up with something that will gain him Archmage status, and he wants to sway public opinion before going before the council of Grandmasters,” Ana said.
“What did Archmage Zard do to receive the title?” Sebastien asked. “I know you have to contribute something significant to a particular field of magic to be considered a Grandmaster, but what about after that?”
Before anyone could answer, Damien suddenly perked up. He stood, waving enthusiastically at a figure making its way through the crowd. “Titus! Over here!”
Titus Westbay, Damien’s older brother, approached their group with measured steps. He wasn’t wearing his uniform, and somehow, it made him look younger—more like Damien. His eyes flickered briefly to Sebastien, and his expression grew somehow uncomfortable before smoothing out again, though Sebastien couldn’t guess why. Maybe he still didn’t trust her around Damien. Titus greeted everyone politely and acquiesced to sitting with them.
Professor Lacer walked through one of the amphitheatre’s side doors, making his usual dramatic entrance with his long jacket flapping behind him. He ignored the scattered cheering that broke out and strode toward Sebastien’s group. “I trust you are all prepared for an...educational experience.”
Titus grinned. “Is that what they call showing off, nowadays?”
Professor Lacer sniffed condescendingly. “Perhaps not when you do it.”
The crowd’s chatter died away, replaced by a wave of silence that spread from the entrance. People began to turn, many bowing deeply as a procession made its way into the arena. A man with long, intricately braided grey hair and wearing a suit that looked like it cost an entire year of University tuition entered. He was wearing a thirteen-pointed crown.
Sebastien’s breath caught in her throat. That man was the High Crown.
A younger man walked at his side, and a retinue of Pendragon Corps guards flanked and followed behind them, their eyes sweeping for danger. The High Crown’s presence seemed to electrify the air. Perhaps to the others, it was with awe, but Sebastien could only tense for danger. “Why is he here?” she asked in a dry, brittle voice.
“Because I invited him,” Professor Lacer said. He was smiling, but the expression did not reach his eyes. With a casual wave of his hand, he began to manipulate the stone of the white cliffs. A section of the amphitheatre stands—the best seats, only a little behind and to the left of Sebastien’s group—rose and assumed the shape of an ostentatious throne. Then, they transformed into pure crystal, catching the light of the sun so that it almost seemed to glow. It was close enough that they would be able to hear the High Crown speak.
The High Crown smiled and nodded benevolently to Professor Lacer, and after a pause for him and the young man at his side—a whisper from Ana confirming him to be the High Crown’s heir—to wave at the crowd and accept some cheers, the older man took the throne.
Sebastien subtly shifted her position, angling herself so that she could keep them in her peripheral vision. She didn’t feel comfortable turning her back on them.
On the stage, a woman with a booming voice spoke. “Welcome to the most anticipated exhibition from the University of Lenore this year! Tickets have been sold out, and you may need to squeeze in a little with your neighbors. Don’t be shy, people, we’re all here for the same reason. Everyone needs to be seated securely before the exhibition can begin.
“Thaddeus Lacer is the youngest Master of free-casting in a century, and also a Grandmaster of sorcery. He fought with honor and brought glory to our nation during the Haze War, and was widely recognized as a war hero after previously confidential records were released to the public. He is not only a champion duelist, but also the patent holder of several spells. This man fought and killed a dragon!” she roared, pointing at Professor Lacer, who was still standing beside Sebastien’s group.
The crowd cheered and stomped until the stone shook.
Sebastien noted that the announcer didn’t mention that Professor Lacer was a member of the Red Guard, even though it was widely speculated and also true. Technically, it was supposed to be a secret.
“Grandmaster Thaddeus Lacer is immensely powerful,” the woman said, calming somewhat. “That is why I must sincerely caution you. Powerful magic can be uncomfortable to experience, both physically and mentally. Those who are pregnant, ill, or easily disturbed in body or mind should avoiding this particular exhibition. You still have five minutes to leave for your own safety. There will be no rescue during the course of the exhibition, no chance to change your mind and leave.”
Beside Sebastien, Damien shifted uncomfortably and pressed his palms flat to the leg of his pants. He noticed her attention and gave a small, awkward smile. “It’s fine. It’s just…a lot of these people probably don’t understand what it will really be like. I hope the organizers have some way to manage anyone who panics.”
As the woman returned to calling out more of Professor Lacer’s various feats, Titus elbowed his younger brother teasingly. “These warnings are only making me more eager,” he said, a grin spreading across his face. “I can’t wait to see what you have in store for us, Thaddeus.”
“My magic will tell the audience more about me than that woman ever could,” Professor Lacer said. With that, he moved to a corner of the stage and took a seat, and the announcer urged everyone to calm down and remain quiet.
People with boxes strapped to their bodies rushed through the audience, handing out handfuls of darkened glasses. Sebastien hurried to put hers on.
Professor Lacer closed his eyes, his body relaxing into a meditative pose. The crowd watched in hushed anticipation as the minutes ticked by. Whatever this spell was, it must be complex and powerful to need such concentration. Likely, he was carefully constructing the spell in his mind’s eye, clarifying his intent and ensuring the forcefulness and soundness of his Will.
The tension in the amphitheater grew palpable as Professor Lacer remained motionless. Some audience members shifted uncomfortably in their seats, while others leaned forward, their gazes fixed on the still figure of the professor.
Finally, after what seemed like an eternity, Professor Lacer’s eyes snapped open. He rose to his feet with fluid grace and strode to the center of the stage. For a moment, his gaze locked with that of the High Crown.
The silence that fell over the crowd was absolute. Even the rustling of clothes and the whisper of breath seemed to have been stolen away. Sebastien’s heart was sincerely pounding in anticipation.
In one smooth motion, Professor Lacer raised both arms towards the sky. In his right hand, he held an enormous, bright blue beast core that seemed to pulse with barely contained power. His left hand grasped his Conduit. Both were secured to his palms by wire bindings so that he could not accidentally drop them.
An invisible pressure seemed to build against her skin. It grew steadily, pressing against her entire body, until she felt as if she were being pinned to her seat by some unseen force.
The silence deepened. Even the sounds that she had not realized still filled the air dampened. The sounds of the rest of the exhibitions, the wind, the city beneath and even the breath in her own lungs fell away. It was a quiet so profound that she felt as if the world itself had frozen around her. It reminded her uncomfortably of the sensory deprivation spell the Pendragon Corps had put her under. If not for her ability to breathe, and blink, and her subtle grasp on her own shadow, she might have panicked.
Then, something came to fill the void that had been left behind. It was two-fold. A deep, resonant thump that she felt more in her bones than heard with her ears on one end, contrasted by a single high-pitched note, just on the edge of her hearing range. She had to concentrate to make sure she wasn’t imagining it, her mind creating something to escape the discomfort. The combination of the two sounds created a disorienting effect, making her feel slightly off balance even as she sat perfectly still.
Then, almost imperceptibly at first, the world around them began to darken.
The air thickened, making it difficult to breathe, and the light continued to dim. Fighting against the ephemeral restraints, she raised her hand to shield her eyes from the sun, subtly using her shadow-familiar to shade her pupils beneath her palm. The darkened glasses would probably help, but she felt more comfortably relying on her own power when her eyesight was at stake.
The sun was experiencing an eclipse, but not in any way Sebastien had ever seen before. Instead of the moon slowly sliding across its face from one side to the other, darkness was growing from a single point at the center of the sun’s disk. The blackness spread outward like a pupil in the center of a glowing iris, consuming the sun’s radiance with an eerie, unnatural progression.
Sebastien shuddered at the sudden feeling of being watched. As the darkness expanded, the pressure and sound grew more intense. The deep, resonant thump that had been vibrating through her bones increased in volume and frequency, while the high-pitched note at the edge of her hearing became more piercing. Sebastien’s chest felt tight, as if an invisible hand were squeezing her lungs.
She watched in awe as the blackness finally engulfed the entire sun, plunging the amphitheater into an otherworldly twilight. The crowd’s murmurs of unease were barely audible over the oppressive soundscape of Professor Lacer’s spell.
‘Is he using the sunlight as an additional source of power for his spell, or does the blackness serve some other purpose?’ she wondered. She had no time to ponder these questions further, as a sudden change swept through the arena.
There was a distinct ‘pop,’ like the sound of a soap bubble bursting, but magnified a thousandfold. In its wake, a wave of energy washed over Sebastien. The fine hairs on her arms and the back of her neck stood up, as if a static charge had passed through her body. Within moments, the sensation intensified. The longer hairs on her head rose, defying gravity. Her clothes, too, started to float and billow as if she were suspended in water.
Her stomach flooded with icy cold and the muscles lining her spine twitched and fizzed with phantom impulses. She had lost sensation from the mid-thigh down, but had a disturbing feeling that she could not only feel the organs within her chest and abdomen, but feel the brain within her skull, quivering within its protective layer of cerebrospinal fluid.
Sebastien squeezed shut her eyes and clenched the edge of the stone seat beneath her, trying to force her racing heart and the instinctive panic that unsettled her thoughts to calm. She didn’t want to miss even a second of this, no matter how her body cried out in primordial fear that something was very, very wrong.
She opened her eyes and looked at Professor Lacer, and then to the artificial eclipse above once more.
Without warning, something else washed over her. This was different, more profound. It felt as if reality itself was shifting around her. Sebastien blinked, disoriented, and found herself in an almost-familiar, yet utterly alien landscape.
She was hanging in a realm of pure, intense light. The air shimmered with energy, and though she could not control her field of view—and in fact seemed to have no body at all—she could see three suns hanging in the sky, their combined brilliance nearly blinding. In the far distance stood a forest of trees whose leaves appeared to absorb light, creating dark silhouettes against the luminous backdrop.
With a jolt of realization, Sebastien understood where she was. This was the Plane of Radiance. If those trees were transported to the mundane realm, they would likely appear to be glowing, and soon after would starve to death from the lack of sufficient light. Her eyes watered slightly, but didn’t burn the way they would have if she were truly there. No, this was some kind of illusion.
As the strange vision of the Plane of Radiance enveloped her senses, Sebastien found that with intense focus, she could glimpse the amphitheater around her, but her body remained frustratingly immobile. The spell’s effects were overwhelming, controlling her perceptions and leaving her feeling as though she were flying through an otherworldly landscape.
Vibrant, reflective gases drifted by in mesmerizing clouds, their colors shifting and swirling in patterns that defied description. In the distance, enormous winged creatures soared majestically. Below, lakes of quicksilver and hills of fiery diamond passed.
Like the rest of the audience, Sebastien was initially captivated by the extraordinary spectacle. However, her attention was suddenly drawn to movement on the stage. Professor Lacer walked toward, and then past her, with an uncharacteristic stiffness. Sebastien strained to follow his progress, her head barely able to shift a few centimeters against the oppressive magical pressure.
From the corner of her eye, she watched as Professor Lacer approached the High Crown’s crystalline throne. The grey-haired man’s body language betrayed agitation as he addressed the professor. “What is the meaning of this, Grandmaster Lacer?” he demanded, his voice tight with tension.
Professor Lacer’s response was casual, almost mocking. “Leandro,” he said, using the High Crown’s first name with deliberate familiarity, “I invited you here because I wanted an opportunity to speak to you in a way that even your dull, arrogant mind could comprehend.”
The High Crown’s posture stiffened. “Is this some sort of threat, Lacer? You’re overstepping your bounds.”
Professor Lacer laughed, the sound devoid of humor. “A threat? Oh, Leandro. You fail to grasp the situation entirely.”
“My guards will kill you if you even make a move to harm me, famous hero or not.”
Lacer gestured broadly, encompassing the immobilized crowd and the helpless guards. “Look around you. Your protectors are useless. They have no idea you are in danger.”
Sebastien realized it was true. One part of her senses was still encompassed by the Plane of Radiance, but other than her, Professor Lacer, and the High Crown himself, no one else seemed to be aware of what was going on in the real world at all. Even the High Crown’s heir, sitting on the stands to his left, was staring wide-eyed at nothing, still and oblivious.
The High Crown’s voice took on a calculating edge. “I see. You’re working for one of my rivals, aren’t you? Name your price, Lacer. Whatever they’re offering, I can double it.”
“You still don’t understand,” Professor Lacer said, his voice dropping to a low, dangerous tone. “I’m not interested in your power at all. I don’t care about these petty power struggles, your idiotic management, or your insecurity.” He leaned in closer, his words precise and cutting. “What upsets me, Leandro, is your utter failure to appreciate my value or my nature. You understand me so little that you actually dared to go after my apprentice.”
Professor Lacer rotated the wire mesh fixtures on his hands, moving the beast core and Conduit to the backs of his hands rather than his palms. Thus free to act without dropping his spell, he reached out, grasping Leandro’s face with frightening strength. The tendons in his arms stood out as he squeezed the High Crown’s jaw muscles, forcing the man’s mouth open.
Sebastien did her best to keep from reacting physically, watching out of the corner of her eye as she screamed internally. ‘What is happening!?’
“Let me make this perfectly clear,” Lacer said, his tone hard as stone and filled with loathing. “I would not have allowed such a thing, even if you were to get down on your knees and grovel before me.”
With a swift motion, Professor Lacer reached into his pocket, withdrawing something she couldn’t quite see. With deliberate slowness, he shoved the object into the High Crown’s gaping mouth.
Whatever magical pressure was keeping the audience in their seats still worked on the man, and though he twitched and strained until the tendons in his neck stood out and the blood vessels in his eyes burst from the pressure, he could not resist. He was hyperventilating at first, and then began to choke.
As the High Crown’s face grew puce and swollen with lack of air, like a bag of blood on the verge of bursting, he suddenly swallowed in a huge, tearing gulp.
‘Or,’ Sebastien realized with a quivering chill, ‘whatever that was crawled down his throat.’
Professor Lacer released the High Crown. His grip left visible marks on the man’s jaw.
The High Crown gasped for air, his eyes wide with panic and confusion.
Lacer’s voice was eerily calm as he explained, “You have just swallowed a curse, Leandro. It is based on a magical beast from the East, the gu. Should you ever act against me or my apprentice again, it will activate. And when it does, hundreds of thousands of extremely poisonous bugs will be released into your body. They will breed and fight inside you, their poison artificially prolonging your life far beyond what any human body should endure. You will experience every moment as they eat each other, liquify your insides, and finally, the winning gu will grow to the size of my fist.”
The High Crown’s face had drained of color and was now an ashen, corpse-like grey as he stared up at Sebastien’s mentor.
Professor Lacer continued. “The gu will liquify your insides and drink until your corpse shrivels, then tear its way out of your skin, ready to repeat this process from scratch.” He reached into his pocket and withdrew a glowing potion. “This will heal your throat. Drink.”
The High Crown shook his head frantically, his wide eyes darting around wildly for help that wouldn’t come. He opened his mouth and strained to scream, but all that came out was a tattered, hoarse rasp.
Professor Lacer forced the healing potion down his throat, too.
The other man’s color improved, and now able to scream, he did so loudly, shrilly, shouting for help and spouting off codes that were meant to alert his guards to danger.
Nothing happened, and no one responded.
“Feel free to seek out curse breakers,” Thaddeus added, almost as an afterthought. “They will find nothing.”
“I’ll go to the Red Guard. They’ll—”
“By all means, do so,” Thaddeus interrupted, his tone growing darker once more as he smiled savagely. “They have already punished me all they are willing to, and I have done much worse than this.”
He leaned in closer to the High Crown and poked him in the belly. “And remember, the gu is already within you. Do you think you have time to remove it before the curse recognizes your intentions?”
As Professor Lacer turned and walked stiffly back down to the stage, Sebastien struggled to keep her breathing even. Her forehead, palms, and back were beaded with cold sweat. When he looked at her, she was already staring blankly ahead, like the rest of the audience. It seemed dangerous to meet his gaze now, to admit that she had seen.
Perhaps he had meant her to. ‘But perhaps,’ she thought, ‘I was partially shielded from the effects of his spell by my shadow. I recently read that some mind-controlling effects, like light, enter through the eyes, and I had protected mine before I looked up at the sun.’
The mesmerizing vision of the Plane of Radiance shifted, and Sebastien found her viewpoint descending toward a city of shining whites and rainbows below. They fell into an area on the outskirts that seemed to be a mix of temple, gardens, and open-architecture palace.
Intricate spires of crystal and light reached toward the three suns, their surfaces refracting and scattering luminescence in dazzling patterns. The gardens were a riot of color, filled with plants that seemed to be made of living gemstones and metals. Instead of swaying in the wind, they pulsed in color with its movement. Reflective pools and fountains spraying mist cast prismatic rainbows across the impossibly smooth walkways.
Despite the alien beauty surrounding her, Sebastien struggled to focus on the details.
There were some gasps and sounds of awe from the audience as the vision came to rest before a humanoid—an angel. It was tall and thin, and stood next to a column holding a spear. Like the Radiant Maiden was said to, it had wings, which trailed all the way to the ground behind it, but did not move in the wind as a bird’s feathers might. “Go no further, strange creature,” it warned, its voice carrying an undercurrent of power that tickled Sebastien’s ears. “This is not a place that one can enter and exit freely.”
“I am a human sorcerer from the mundane plane,” Professor Lacer said, “and this form you see is merely a spell I am using to contact you.”
Small sounds from the audience let Sebastien know that everyone else could hear this, at least.
“Are you one of the Radiant Maiden’s host?” he asked.
The angel’s demeanor shifted, becoming more guarded. “I am,” it confirmed.
Lacer nodded, his posture relaxed despite the gravity of the moment. “I offer to trade three lengths of enenra cloth for three of your feathers.”
The angel considered the offer for a moment, its radiance pulsing subtly. “This is a fair trade,” it declared. “Is that…all you have come for? You will depart afterward?”
“Immediately,” Professor Lacer agreed. He drew forth some dark, tattered cloth wrapped around a board from one of his larger pockets, and threw it into the sky. It disappeared into the blackness covering the sun.
The angel had the cloth in its hands, suddenly. It looked extremely out of place there, both dark and threadbare, but it seemed pleased with it. It plucked three of its feathers.
Sebastien looked up. Three feathers were falling from the sky.
Thaddeus bowed, and then, with a sudden rush of sensation, the vision of the Plane of Radiance dissolved.
The crowd erupted into thunderous applause, their cheers echoing off of and rumbling through the stone.
The High Crown rose abruptly from his crystalline throne, his face ashen and his movements unsteady. He stumbled down the steps, one hand pressed to his stomach as if to quell a rising nausea. He was not alone in seeming overwhelmed, and several healers began to make their way in through the side entrances. A few moved toward the High Crown, but he waved them off violently.
Damien leaned towards Sebastien, his voice low and tinged with surprise. “I suppose even someone like him can be susceptible to the effects of such intense magic.”
Professor Lacer’s voice rang out across the amphitheater, drawing all eyes back to him. “What you have just witnessed is a breakthrough in planar magic,” he announced, his tone carrying a hint of pride. “I have developed a new method of accessing the elemental planes without physically entering them. This innovation will allow for greater freedom of exploration and, potentially, open new avenues for trade with these realms.”
As the High Crown neared the exit, still looking decidedly unwell, Thaddeus’s gaze flickered between the retreating noble and Sebastien. His lips twitched in that subtle, familiar expression of amusement that Sebastien had come to recognize. The professor’s voice cut through the murmurs of the crowd once more.
“Before we conclude, I have one more announcement that may interest you all,” he declared. “In approximately one hour, right here in this arena, we will witness a duel. The High Crown’s heir has challenged my apprentice to magical combat.”
A collective gasp rose from the spectators, followed by excited chatter. The High Crown, who had almost reached the exit, froze. He turned slowly around. His face, already pale, seemed to lose what little color remained. “No!” he cried out, his voice a strangled refusal that teetered on the edge of a shout.
Thaddeus continued, seemingly unfazed by the monarch’s outburst. “I understand the High Crown’s reluctance. After all, there is an inherent imbalance in pitting someone who has achieved their Master’s certificate against a second-term University student. I know the High Crown to be an honorable man who would not authorize such injustice. However, we have agreed upon a suitable handicap for Mr. Pendragon, to make things more balanced.” A sly smile played at the corners of Professor Lacer’s mouth. “And I believe my apprentice might just surprise us all.”
The younger Pendragon looked in confusion between the High Crown and Professor Lacer, and then turned to pick Sebastien out of the crowd.
Damien turned to Sebastien. “Why didn’t you say anything about this?”
Sebastien’s lips felt numb. “I just found out about it,” she croaked, her voice barely above a whisper.
Author Note:
This week was a bit rough, as I was feeling a bit under the weather without being explicitly ill. But I still managed to finish a chapter! (Basically ALL I managed to do.)
I have noticed that the majority of the chapters in Book 5 so far are longer than my historical average for the series, and again so with this one. It really adds up over time.
Comments
Wait the Radiant Maiden is real? I thought she was made up?
Jonathan Sayres
2025-02-25 16:17:41 +0000 UTCThat was epic
Jonathan Crandall
2024-11-16 03:04:09 +0000 UTCDoing a re-read of the chapters encompassing final exam week. Found myself wondering if Lacer's " new method of accessing the elemental planes without physically entering them" will come back in the future to get rid of the entity locked in S' memory. S is going to need help at some point (I think)
Melinda Hutson
2024-11-03 03:22:20 +0000 UTCYeah I don't think it was a bluff. We've already seen him kill two people just on a casual whim, he almost killed the High Crown the moment he heard about the attempt to kidnap Sebastian, and he didn't seem to care at all about the possibilty of a few people dying due to his conduit "prank". Any restraint Thaddeus shows is because he's aware of the consequences. If he's gone to such lengths to engineer a situation in which he can curse someone I cannot imagine he would use it just as a bluff. Also, I think part of the reason he buys into the stories about the Raven Queen is that he relates to the desire to flaunt his power and do as he pleases, the way she supposedly does. If he's inspired by her then I suspect the apparent lack of restraint is what he would imitate.
hhttghlk
2024-11-02 06:18:17 +0000 UTCIf the curse is real, I'm thinking it relies on the perception of the castor or the cursed to activate, however if RQ is in a bind, reaveling to the king she is Sebastian may activate it
Jule Mercer
2024-10-23 07:32:36 +0000 UTCDepends on how the divination is working if it’s information based like Lacer was doing to S a couple of chapters ago, her subconscious would be the betrayer but if it is divining TRUTH as some third or fourth order transmogrification sympathy, the magic would be the thing that checks.
Alexander Dupree
2024-10-22 15:04:44 +0000 UTCWell arguably they found her just fine
Alexander Dupree
2024-10-22 14:20:04 +0000 UTCI’m betting it’s a weak version of Myrddins shield in esoteric form and she can use it to absorb any energy at all eventually.
Alexander Dupree
2024-10-22 03:54:33 +0000 UTCHe looked around in confusion because his father had just shouted out “no!” and he wasn’t expecting opposition from that front. > The High Crown, who had almost reached the exit, froze. He turned slowly around. His face, already pale, seemed to lose what little color remained. “No!” he cried out, his voice a strangled refusal that teetered on the edge of a shout.
Hannah
2024-10-21 08:53:56 +0000 UTCSome Nulls can do magic though, and Thaddeus theorized that the Naught bloodline could be a surviving enclave of those people. They're highly valued for military reasons, and were mostly wiped out. From Ch 92: """ Naught. Perhaps a variant on “Null?” He had heard rumors, of course, about those who were born with the traits of a Null, yet still able to cast magic. How they could resist the madness that came with casting through their own flesh and blood. It was clear enough that they were more than children’s tales, but he had thought all those with that particular mutation gone hundreds, if not thousands, of years before. Resistance was not complete negation, after all, and they were a powerful potential threat to enemy and ally alike. Perhaps the Naughts had managed to slip through the cracks, the secrecy of the People keeping them out of modern records, maintaining their abilities through careful breeding, or even inbreeding. Or, perhaps the Blood Emperor’s experiments had not been so fruitless, after all. This changed everything. """
M
2024-10-20 20:38:02 +0000 UTCShe is not a Null. Nulls can’t do magic. She “slipped” through the wards since she/Sebastian has been invited into the room before.
Apep
2024-10-20 20:33:06 +0000 UTCUnlike Sebastien's assumption, I wonder if she evaded the paralysis due to being a Null. Similar to when she slipped through the wards around the university's Myrddin books and Lacer/Kiernan were surprised.
M
2024-10-20 16:42:32 +0000 UTCI was thinking he’d maybe been turned down before, but it seems unlikely. Feels pretty audacious from Lacer if that’s the case, not an action we’d associated with his character at all.
James Barclay
2024-10-20 04:02:22 +0000 UTCI dunno about the heir challenging S. "The younger Pendragon looked in confusion between the High Crown and Professor Lacer, and then turned to pick Sebastien out of the crowd." I think this might be entirely Lacer.
Melinda Hutson
2024-10-20 03:22:40 +0000 UTCthis is a heck of a chapter, I regret not having the time to read it right away. lacer's play is clever and terrifying. it's either a bluff that the crown really can't afford to test and if so seems to be leaning on the raven queen's MO, or it's real in which case it is a terrifying type of curse that even cursebreakers cannot detect. if it's real either it relies on the cursed's perception, or it depends on underlying truths, if it relies on the cursed perception all is fine(big asterisk on fine), and Lacer has ensured peace for him and his apprentice, if it depends on underlying truths lacer has just killed the high crown on a timer lasting till the next time he takes a stab at the raven queen. if it's real it seems like the thing that would finally push lacer over the metaphorical ledge to realising S's nature
Aifhwinx
2024-10-19 09:44:22 +0000 UTCI'm starting to think S is going to use her shadow familiar as a conduit for casting without a conduit. Holding her familiar on the daily like that feels like Chekhov's gun and not just a training aid. Something amazing will come from it
LEMON
2024-10-19 05:24:44 +0000 UTCI was NOT READY for this chapter. Holy fuck Lacer. No wonder the red guard doesn’t respect governments.
darkmuch
2024-10-19 03:21:27 +0000 UTCDude he is def the type to do that
James Cutter
2024-10-19 01:57:42 +0000 UTCI personally love the longer chapters, but that's because I love your writing so much and I never want it to end! This is a crazy cool thing that Lacer discovered to be able to reach other Planes. And I can't wait for the duel!
Silvia Wakefield
2024-10-18 22:27:28 +0000 UTCI was doing some rereading last night. The red guard meeting lie detection spell / artifact. When S says she doesn’t have anything that she thinks would help them. Even though S didn’t think she lied and didn’t intend to lie. It still reported a lie. S blames her subconscious for the spell detecting the lie. If “magic” itself knew she lied it wouldn’t matter what she thought. Small difference in intent of the spell / artifact. “is this person telling a lie” vs. “does this person think they are telling a lie.” I’m probably overthinking it though. Would be another example of a spell going beyond it’s intended target. I can see an artifact like that would be really overpowered. Maybe if its an aberrant based artifact.
Alex
2024-10-18 20:45:38 +0000 UTCI thought it was implying that she used the shadow spell in addition to the glasses. Like a second layer behind the lenses. “Would probably” to me meant she doesn’t trust random handed out glasses for protection. In all likelihood the glasses are probably fine for protection. But she has a trust but verify mentality. She would rather trust her own powers to protect her eyes. Also seems like she was right since she wasn’t held by the spell like everyone else. She wouldn’t use only the shadow spell on her face in front of so many people. The high crown is sitting nearby and her mentor is the main focus of the show. Lots of people are going to also be looking at S by proxy. Suddenly using a shadow spell without a cover, when you are linked to the raven queen… and the high crown is nearby would be idiotic.
Alex
2024-10-18 20:19:59 +0000 UTCI am feral right now waiting for the next chapter or two.
Karma
2024-10-18 17:18:40 +0000 UTCI'm confused about the glasses. Was Sebastian wearing them? This says she was: "...handing out handfuls of darkened glasses. Sebastien hurried to put hers on." This implies she wasn't: "...she raised her hand to shield her eyes from the sun, subtly using her shadow-familiar to shade her pupils beneath her palm. The darkened glasses would probably help, but she felt more comfortably relying on her own power when her eyesight was at stake" She could be wearing them, and using her hand and shadow, but saying the glasses *would probably* help, implies that she wasn't wearing them because is she was she'd know how much they helped.
AntiClimax she her
2024-10-18 16:34:53 +0000 UTCThe gu sounds like it is closer to a potion than a spell, or is at least something he prepared earlier
FuriousDee
2024-10-18 15:00:27 +0000 UTCIt is nice evidence that he won’t turn on her when he finds out
FuriousDee
2024-10-18 14:59:27 +0000 UTCI WAS NOT READY FOR THIS! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH! AZALEA THANK YOU! EVERYONE HAS BEEN ELOQUENT AND ANALYZED IT ENOUGH SO I'M FREE TO JUST SCREAM !!!!AWESOME!!!!
Lya
2024-10-18 14:50:32 +0000 UTCI wonder if Lacer purposely chose the plane of radiance as a show of superiority over Archmage Zard, since it was said that radiance is the only element thay he hasn't done a great deed with.
a_cool_ass_bird
2024-10-18 13:52:53 +0000 UTCIt doesn't sound like Lacer to bluff.
FuriousDee
2024-10-18 11:01:12 +0000 UTCI mean, by immediately calling for his guards and using code phrases, it seems like he did in fact test it, at least in terms of intent... But nothing happened.
Keid
2024-10-18 10:34:13 +0000 UTCAs someone else pointed out, magic cares about intent but it also doesn't care about being shapeshifted. So if the gu is even real (isn't a curse a spell? And if so how did thaddeus "dual casting is impossible" lacer cast both the plane of radiance and the gu?) then I think it would activate upon attacking siobhan, which might just give lacer the info he needs to connect the dots and cut through the BS.
HardcoreLace756
2024-10-18 10:32:45 +0000 UTCHonestly, that kinda just makes both of their stories worse and is kinda contradicted by Thaddeus PoV chapters. Zard is noted to be over 100 years old with a specialty in elemental magic... If he just started pretending to be a child sometimes in his 50s+ just to impress people with a persona that has different specialties and fascinations from him, pretended to have an issue with transmogrification, etc... That's just kinda pathetic and weird. Both men seem to constantly be busy with very well-publicized and distinct stories from one another.
Keid
2024-10-18 10:32:02 +0000 UTCOne of them is an illusion/projection/homunculi, I would guess the professor laxer we know
on the upside
2024-10-18 10:10:22 +0000 UTCThey are definitely distinct and separate people because there is a chapter that mentions how everyone at some point would clap and cheer when archmage zard came by because they thought he prevented Lacer from experimenting on someone? Or something like that. And how he was confused about it but still received the attention tion with grace.
Emma Mass
2024-10-18 10:09:27 +0000 UTCAmazing chapter love this book and hope you feel better soon
Finn
2024-10-18 07:33:41 +0000 UTCOh my word oh my this is good! You positively made my day! The suspense is killing me in the best of ways.
Briar
2024-10-18 06:29:42 +0000 UTCSebastian was on the list of people to pick up with a connection to the Raven Queen. They never actually found him of course.
David McGillicuddy
2024-10-18 05:59:23 +0000 UTCI think Thaddeus was taking a leaf out of her book and bluffing about the curse. How could the Crown possibly risk testing it after expert curse breakers found nothing?
David McGillicuddy
2024-10-18 05:57:47 +0000 UTCI can’t remember. Did the High Crown really go after Sebastian or only after Siobhan?
Apep
2024-10-18 05:47:16 +0000 UTCUnexpected masterpiece. Out of all the web novels I read this is the one I'm most interested in reading each week.
LEMON
2024-10-18 05:14:22 +0000 UTCPrediction: Thaddius Lacer is Archmage Zard, The unknowable power, the breakthroughs in magic, Lacers visits to the library seem to coincide with Zards, also the fact that surely Zard is complicit in what Lacer does and if he is it does not seem that far a reach to think them the same person
on the upside
2024-10-18 04:50:53 +0000 UTCYeah, although, extremely funny if he ever captures her ans she just transforms right in front of him and convinces him and then he dies
Kaelik
2024-10-18 04:25:31 +0000 UTCMagic isn't fooled by the shape shifting. Feel like we've seen multiple examples recently. The red guard rain tracking spell. "“It only works in the rain?” Siobhan asked. She tried to remember if she’d been out in the rain recently. She had, in fact, on several occasions. Except that it had always been as Sebastien. It was possible they’d found and discarded her multiple times, not knowing who she was." The wards around the journals. "Siobhan followed Thaddeus to the small, warded room that held three of Myrddin’s other journals. She slowed as she was forced to push through the magical resistance around the doorway. Finally, she slipped past as if the barrier were a thick, invisible soap bubble that snapped back into place behind her. Kiernan let out a strangled sound from behind her. She turned, looking for whatever danger had surprised him, but found him looking between Siobhan and the threshold several times, his eyes wide with awe. He pushed through the doorway himself, and as soon as Thaddeus met his gaze, pointed urgently and silently to the doorway. “What is wrong? Has an intruder disturbed your wards?” Siobhan guessed." It seems like magic knows the intended "target" of a spell cast on a "person" Even if that person is shape shifted. So well the Crown may not know they are acting against S the magic does. "Should you ever act against me or my apprentice again, it will activate." Lacer says it can detect intent but he never said that was the trigger. We also know that magic has some sort of consciousness. In my mind it makes sense that the magic knows that Siobhan and Sebastien are the same "target". It was cast to protect the 2 targets of the spell Lacer and Sebastien. It doesn't care if the High Crown knows the target. As long as the magic knows it will perform its action as cast. Lacer intended to let only Sebastien past the wards. That didn't matter it still allowed both past. The red guard rain spell intended to only track the raven queen. That didn't matter it still tracked both Sebastien and the Raven Queen.
Alex
2024-10-18 04:22:13 +0000 UTCMaybe, but would the gu even recognize if the high crown acted against the raven queen? Presumably its activation is based on the host's intentions, and the high crown doesn't know siobhan's identity. But that is a super cool complication...
Nick Roman
2024-10-18 04:00:58 +0000 UTCPersonally, I don't think this was traditional binding magic. I think, even more masterfully, that people's conscious experience being drawn into the plane of radiance was an essential component designed into the transdimensional proxy spell, giving Lacer all kinds of plausible deniability. He is, after all, presumably going to release this spell for use by others, and their experiences should match up. I mean, keep in mind that Lacer can fundamentally only cast one spell at a time, that this spell was being freecast, which even for Thaddeus puts a limit on complexity, and also that he was recently talking about retrieving a component for Sebastien that would grant him the ability to manipulate minds with light. I think he is using that mystery component in a big way, to transmit the minds of all who see the light of a portal into the body of some sort of construct. This economically important usage will presumably help keep [mystery component] legal to use and available far into the future, which in turn helps protect Sebastien in other ways. And I think he designed the spell with the various ways it might help Sebastien and give him cover simultaneously in mind, with the world-changing implications and the prospect of being an official archmage only being minor details that help solidify his cover, and not a priority.
Keid
2024-10-18 03:55:46 +0000 UTCtyfc
Ulsar
2024-10-18 03:50:20 +0000 UTCLacer kind of put the high crown in a catch-22 situation. 2 possibilities I could see playing out. Panchos commented theory. Its a bluff. He didn't put anything in the high crown. Learned from Siobhan that if you make it feel real enough then people will believe something actually went down their throat. To quote Lacer. “Feel free to seek out curse breakers,” Thaddeus added, almost as an afterthought. “They will find nothing.” That would makes sense if there is nothing to find. My other thought. It was real. He acts against the Raven queen in a public setting and ends up dead by "accident". This would add to the Raven queen mythos. People would fear her more. Also maybe respect her if they thought she could kill the high crown but waited until he acted against her again. A terrifying person but also in some ways reasonable. Didn't kill the crown until multiple attacks against her. She warned him with her letter... That would set off a chain of events. Oliver and Katerin thinking they really misread how powerful Siobhan is. The undreaming order calming down their "revenge planning." Lacer trying to figure out why the curse triggered. The red guard being more cautious. Also would be more story with the High Crown's Heir. Maybe their will be a fight for the Crown. Maybe Oliver will trigger his plan in the panic after. I still have this thought in the back of my mind that at some point Sebastian will get pulled into the Heir fight for the crown due to the made up heritage Oliver came up with. That whole Siverling line descended from the daughter of king Krell and the court mage. Line of succession plot. Against Sebastian's own wishes they become the future Heir of the high crown. Backed by his crown family friends and Oliver. The undreaming order becomes the spy network for the new Crown. Then we turn to wider world issues. Osham blaming Lenore for the Architects of Khronos. Or dealing with the Black Wastes. I'm bias though, I'm a sucker for empire building fantasy.
Alex
2024-10-18 03:37:39 +0000 UTCI hope next week is better for you. I loved this chapter and it's implications and can't wait for the duel. Anyway, here's a few quick typos: "should avoiding this particular exhibition." -> "should avoid this particular exhibition" "she felt more comfortably relying on her own power" -> "she felt more comfortable relying on her own power"
Keid
2024-10-18 03:26:55 +0000 UTCOh my god, Azalea, *what* a chapter! As soon as the High Crown walked in I suddenly knew why Lacer decided to put on a demonstration. But I was not expecting that! It was a display of arrogant and overwhelming power to curse the High Crown before an entire stadium of people and get away with it. And Sebastien saw everything. With her paranoia in only trusting her own power paying off, that was one hell of a scene. AND THEN YOU GO AND DROP THE DUEL AT THE END, just like that?!?!?! I am deceased. Someone use me as their sleep raven to get extra productivity and release me from my slumber next week, I don’t think I have the strength to wait all that time. By the way, I’ve been wondering if Siobhan will ever end up casting through her own flesh at some point. It’s been built up so much since the very beginning with the reasonable possibility that she might actually be able to handle it and could maybe be stronger than her mother, but I’m not sure if it would be cooler if it happened and she was or if she actually is sensible in the face of overwhelming odds and finds another way and this Chekhov’s gun never goes off. I still think there’s good odds that the Aberrant inside her is what became of her mother or her mother became the portal that allowed the Aberration through into their world (her twisted nightmare portal/mirror that she sees when dreaming had a familiar face). It would make sense - she kept casting and casting, letting the magic flow through her so she became a conduit to power and then broke to make that literal in another way. Anyway, end of 4AM speculations.
Hannah
2024-10-18 03:20:22 +0000 UTCI am sorry to hear that you had a rough week and hope the coming one is better for you. But, WOW! That was QUITE the chapter.
Melinda Hutson
2024-10-18 03:04:30 +0000 UTCI suspect that it will be the raven queen who will do the confronting.
Enif
2024-10-18 02:51:59 +0000 UTCMaybe or maybe that’s how Lacer finds out.
Enif
2024-10-18 02:50:07 +0000 UTCThat was amazing! But if you’re pushing yourself too much please take a break, start doing half chapters. Whatever you have to do to not burn out. Your wellbeing is much more important than our entertainment.
Enif
2024-10-18 02:48:44 +0000 UTCIn both cases she wasn’t exactly playing by the book. I assume real duelling has more strict rules on what can’t be done. Unless Lacer wants an accident to befall the young crown.
James Barclay
2024-10-18 02:14:37 +0000 UTCShe also had that fight with the Red Guard, and though she ran away it was no doubt fantastic experience
A nice fire
2024-10-18 02:13:31 +0000 UTCProfessor Lacer played a 4D Chess move right there. I suspect some incredibly convoluted set of individually improbable circumstance aligned, that allowed Sebastian to escape what I suspect is Lacer's binding magic. Yes, binding magic. A combination of the strengthened resistance against external influence that the gestura spell gives, Sebastian ability to split here will, and her shadow familiar filtering or altering the light she took in. (Makes me wonder how important this spell is or it potential. It's always mentioned distinctly how both siabhon and Sebastian have the same distinct, fathomless dark eyes.) It gives Lacer room for something incredibly important: Plausible deniability. Nobody can even suspect he performed or is even capable of such widespread mass mind control/hypnosis. Because they were there, and for them....nothing really happened. At least nothing but making he's frankly paradigm shifting appeal to be promoted from grandmaster to archmage. It's an incredibly good smoke screen to be honest. I wonder how the mechanics of Lacer's spell works. How did he overcome the will resistance of the stronger thaumaturgists? Especially that many at once? Is he just that much stronger than everyone? My most excitable theory is that he bound their will - likely using light. Maybe the entire point of the display of the eclipse was to infuse the light they were seeing with the binding that they willingly letting in or to get them staring long enough at an object people typically avoid looking at for long periods of time lest the risk blindness, and that particular vulnerability was strong enough to act as penetration and sufficient enough to enable binding. If so, binding magic is terrifying. No wonder it's illegal. I suspect this particular flavour of it might be a little more than illegal and entirely forbidden. I guess that's why Lacer knew of that binding magic case with the two step daughter and step mother that he told the raven queen about and is so interested in her question about how to encapsulate a conscious. If she is an encapsulated consciousness and myrdinns Carnagor. The implications are terrifying. That was some serious blood magic. Making a stand full of hundreds- probably thousands of people, be mind controlled into this sort of unpercieving, locked state. I wonder if anyone will notice they lost time. I'm still trying to wrap my head around the implications and significance of what Lacer just did. I'm mind blown at his power. I stand by what I said in a previous comment about grandmasters and archmages being outside the bounds of what normal society can handle and the only thing really keeping them in check is each other and their own decency. Particularly free casters. I wonder if this spell gives any feedback to the caster of the bound parties state, and if Lacer has any awareness about the state of the people caught in the binding. If so did he notice Sebastian? Sorry this is so long, I just couldn't stop thinking about it and had to share my stream of consciousness.
Emma Mass
2024-10-18 02:04:05 +0000 UTCMy guess is that it wouldn't activate. It seems to react to his intention, so unless he knew that they are the same person it won't kill him.
Wyatt Hauben
2024-10-18 01:59:48 +0000 UTCI cannot wait for Sebastian to confront Lacer about the duel. The duel certainly came out of left field, but I assume the High Crown’s heir did actually challenge Sebastian, maybe as a result of a perceived slight by Lacer. Sebastian has little experience duelling, though she still did pretty well against Ana’s uncle.
James Barclay
2024-10-18 01:59:29 +0000 UTCWell it is a breakthrough in planar magic, it may well boost him to being an Archmage.
James Barclay
2024-10-18 01:55:30 +0000 UTCMy reaction exactly
ParadoxFox
2024-10-18 01:53:37 +0000 UTCIt'd be a dangerous gamble, but it's certainly plausible!
Daniel
2024-10-18 01:51:08 +0000 UTCMother of God, Thaddeus does not fuck around with his integrity. He said he would protect Sebastien, and bam! Loved it!
Brandon Maguire
2024-10-18 01:50:01 +0000 UTCIt depends on how it activate: "Should you ever act against me or my apprentice again, it will activate" If the curse recognize Siobhan as Sebastien it could activate, that would be a big loophole to find her though. And if it's only based on intent it would not activate if tries to do something to Sebastien without realizing and Lacer might have thought about that. But that was mostly a fun thought, though it would be a very funny and convoluted way for Lacer to discover the truth :p
Adspartan
2024-10-18 01:44:49 +0000 UTCI don’t see lacer bluffing…
Jordan Rogers
2024-10-18 01:41:22 +0000 UTCI had the same thought. Like the wards for the journals. Lacer let Sebastien in. Then when Siobhan came to read the books she walked through them without problem. Would be crazy the rumors that would start if the high crown acts against the raven queen in a large public setting. Then proceeds to become a shriveled corpse right in front of everyone. I wonder if people would respect her more. Thinking that she had the power to kill the crown at any time. Then waited and didn't until he acted against her again.
Alex
2024-10-18 01:40:05 +0000 UTCSo is the king gonna die when he randomly tries to strike the raven queen again? As he inadvertently is attacking “Sebastian “?
Jordan Rogers
2024-10-18 01:40:04 +0000 UTCGreat chapter
Jordan Rogers
2024-10-18 01:39:17 +0000 UTCGod damn. I just had to come to the comments to express my appreciation for this chapter
Hugh Jass
2024-10-18 01:38:49 +0000 UTCWow, this chapter was...wow. amazing Azalea
Emma Mass
2024-10-18 01:38:35 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter!!!! Can’t wait to see how the duel works out…though S is going to crush it of course 😊
Amanda Dimitrov
2024-10-18 01:32:20 +0000 UTCI don't believe it would since it seems to activate based on intent. And if the intent is to harm the Raven Queen, it's *obviously* not to harm Sebastian.
Hibou Ronchon
2024-10-18 01:25:52 +0000 UTCmy guess is that he learned from siobhan and he just put something in his belly that hurt going down and put the fear of god on him. letting his rep do the heavy lifting
Pancho
2024-10-18 01:21:22 +0000 UTCahhh!!! :screams and runs in circles: ahhhhh
Pancho
2024-10-18 01:19:42 +0000 UTCSo he was showing of indeed, while casually cursing the High Crown and I guess he wanted to show why he choose Sebastien hence the duel. Maybe she'll get enough contribution points with that to get her own room !
Adspartan
2024-10-18 01:16:15 +0000 UTCI CANT WAIT FOR NEXT WEEK!!
FeelingsandFoibles
2024-10-18 01:12:30 +0000 UTCOk, who wants to bet the curse is going to activate for Siobhan / the Raven Queen ? x'D
Adspartan
2024-10-18 01:09:02 +0000 UTC:)
ShadyTundra
2024-10-18 01:04:15 +0000 UTCI wonder if professors get bonuses when they give an exhibition too ^^ And damn that's some serious public !
Adspartan
2024-10-18 01:02:33 +0000 UTC