Chapter 227 - Demonstrations of Skill and Power
Added 2024-10-11 00:54:25 +0000 UTCSebastien
Month 9, Day 1, Wednesday 2:00 p.m.
Wednesday afternoon, while she and her friends were hanging about, Sebastien was asked to fill in for a third exhibition, this time for Natural Science. This time, they gave her a couple hours of advance notice. Several of her friends were intrigued and decided to follow her.
“This isn’t fair,” Damien complained. “Why are they scheduling exhibitions when they know the students are going to be in exams?” Sometimes, Sebastien forgot that Damien was taking the maximum seven classes each term—one more than her. He still had his Divination exam scheduled for the latter half of the day, while everyone else was free.
Sebastien took advantage of the extra time to plan something different. When she arrived at the exhibition area, she made several requests to the organizers: ten pounds of cotton or any other fibrous material they could provide; a bucket each of wood, dirt, and stone; and a standing wall or chalkboard to use as a base for her spell array.
As before, they were enthusiastic about meeting her requests, and the organizer in charge of advertising started dramatically yelling stuff like, “Come one, come all, and witness a demonstration of skill and power by none other than Sebastien Siverling, the only person that Grandmaster Thaddeus Lacer has ever found worthy in his lifetime! That’s right! Sebastien Siverling, the young man that Thaddeus Lacer chose, even when it is well known that he turned down the High Crown’s own heir!” The man put a hand to the side of his mouth and leaned forward as if sharing a secret, despite the fact that he was yelling at almost the top of his lungs. “You might have read about Mr. Siverling in the newspapers.”
There was a pause, and though the man’s back was turned, Sebastien was still somehow sure, based on body language alone, that he had just given an exaggerated wink. “And folks, he’s here today to show you the true, secret wonder of Natural Science. Did you think Natural Science was boring and useless, barely real magic? Well, think again! Prepare to be amazed!” It went on like that.
Sebastien had a sudden, revelatory suspicion. ‘Are the organizers somehow being rewarded by how many people their exhibitions attracted? Well, hopefully they’re not disappointed.’ She had something less flashy planned than an illusion play or mock elemental battle.
Once the materials arrived, Sebastien arranged the component buckets on stools of varying heights around the edges of the chalkboard spell array. By this time, a substantial audience had arrived.
When the organizers gave her the signal to begin, Sebastien smiled and turned to the crowd. “It’s true that Natural Science is all about the magic that can be found in nature and the world around us, but it isn’t just about recreating mundane phenomenon. It’s about understanding how and why things work the way they do. And once you understand that…it becomes much easier to bend the world to your will in novel ways.”
She turned to the chalkboard. “What you are about to see is transmutation alone. I have some basic components—” she showed off the buckets “—but with a few exceptions, I will only be using them for their similarities to the substances I need. It makes transmutation easier when converting dirt to different dirt, or stone into a gem. It would be equally possible for me to do all of this using only the air—it would just take a lot longer, and I doubt any of you feel like sitting around for two or three days while I work at it.”
A young woman’s voice from the back of the crowd yelled, “I’ll sit on you for two or three days, Sebastien!”
Sebastien almost choked, and was thankful for the crowd’s laughter that allowed her to gather her wits. She tried to keep her expression stoic, though whatever she had been about to say was forgotten. She cleared her throat and finished quickly. “I will not be using any duplicative transmogrification today. Observe.”
With the audience’s attention captured, Sebastien began to cast. She started by creating a couple of cables, which she connected to the top of the chalkboard so that she didn’t have to make her creation float the whole time, in addition to everything else. From those cables, she grew a thick, circular backing of cotton fabric, dense enough that the tapestry would hang properly, rather than rippling and fluttering in the wind or bending under its own weight.
The crowd expressed their amazement with soft gasps and murmurs of appreciation, even though Sebastien felt she hadn’t yet reached the truly interesting part of her demonstration.
It took her a while to grow a layer of orb-weaver silk atop the cotton base, and she worried that the audience would grow bored, but didn’t notice anyone actually leaving.
Once the base was complete, Sebastien moved on to the art. She started with the sky. It was simple enough to transmute some of the dirt from the bucket into a light blue mineral dye. It was one of the many substances they had practiced with in Practical Casting, and while she didn’t know it as well as the auxiliary exercise materials Professor Lacer had assigned her, she had no problem achieving something that was close enough. She embedded tiny particles of this dye through the silk strands, creating a gradient in the top third of the silk circle. To add depth and nuance to the color, Sebastien then discreetly applied the color-changing spell to the silken threads themselves in a slightly different shade.
Then came the ground, which took up the bottom third of the tapestry. Browns were easy, and a little boring. To remedy this, she added variety, showing the different levels of soil beneath the ground, as if the tapestry were showing a slice of land that had just been sliced through and separated by an Archmage.
Green filled the middle, a base for what was to come, and then she returned to the ground and began to add texture. She molded dirt and rocks into little textured buttons of various shapes, sizes, and surface finishes, with a loop on the back for the silk to thread through, and used them to create an even more realistic illusion.
With these, she simulated the different kinds of soil beneath the earth, adding the occasional rock, hollow, flow of sand, or layer of clay. A combination of mica and mineral pigments created a subtle but obvious shimmer in places, hinting at magic.
Sebastien added a majestic tree to the tapestry, its roots spreading deep into the earth and its branches into the sky. With meticulous care, she attached slender strips of wood to the fabric, creating an illusion of depth that made the tree appear to be emerging from the tapestry itself. The audience gasped and murmured among themselves, and Sebastien looked up briefly as the organizer pushed back a few members of the crowd that had been trying to get uncomfortably close.
Next, she turned her attention to the leaves. Using a combination of transmutation and her color-changing spell, Sebastien crafted translucent, shimmering surface leaves that seemed to dance in an unseen breeze, and the shadow of depth and abundant foliage behind them. There was some applause, but she was too engrossed in creation to pay much attention to it.
Sebastien wove blades of grass into the foreground, each one a delicate, smooth line of embroidered silk. Rolling hills receded into the distance. In the sky, she placed birds in mid-flight, their wings spread wide as if caught in a moment of graceful soaring. Glittering hints of wind currents flowed through the scene, visible only as subtle refractions of light.
Velvet-soft, milky clouds drifted across the upper portion of the tapestry, their edges tinged with gold as if illuminated by a setting sun. Between the branches of the tree and beneath the earth, Sebastien added small creatures peeking out or burrowing into their homes. A fox’s curious eyes gleamed from behind a root, while a family of field mice scurried along a hidden tunnel. A tiny skeleton of white stone lay in a hollow beneath the roots of the tree.
So engrossed was she in her work that Sebastien lost track of time. It wasn’t until the University bell tolled the hour that she realized how long she had been working. She looked at the tapestry critically. There was more she could do, much more, but surely the audience was growing tired.
She stepped back and turned to them. “One of the first things you learn in Natural Science is that everything is connected. Our world is one big ecosystem, with life and death, what is above and what is below, all flowing from and feeding each other.” She gestured to the tapestry. “This is a depiction of a simple ecosystem. Please, feel free to come up and examine it more closely once the judges have made their evaluation. Even touch it, if you like.”
“Only after you have washed your hands!” a man in the audience cried. “And be gentle.”
Sebastien eyed him curiously, but nodded. It would be a shame if her work was destroyed by carelessness.
As she stepped to the side to wait for the judges to decide if she would be awarded contribution points, the man from the audience approached.
He studied the tapestry reverently, leaning in to examine the intricate details with a monocle held to his eye. Tentatively, be brushed a finger along the tree’s translucent surface leaves.
He straightened and nodded decisively to himself, reminded the rest of the crowd, “Be careful. It is delicate,” and strode over to Sebastien.
Sebastien didn’t think it was actually that delicate. Orb-weaver silk was incredibly strong for its size, after all.
The man introduced himself and shook her hand. “Your work is extraordinary. I’d like to purchase it, if possible.”
Sebastien tilted her head with surprise, then looked to the exhibition organizers.
“You can sell it as long as it remains on display for the remainder of the exhibitions.”
“I’ll have a glass case put up around it so that it isn’t sullied,” the man said, as if the deal was already done.
Sebastien hadn’t even had a chance to open her mouth when Ana smoothly stepped up beside her. With a charming smile, she introduced herself to the potential buyer and began to negotiate on Sebastien’s behalf. Sebastien watched, impressed with how at ease her friend seemed, as well as the ridiculous price she offered the man.
While this exchange took place, one of the judges approached Sebastien. “Impressive work,” he said, nodding approvingly. “Sixty contribution points seems appropriate.”
By the time Sebastien had finished slipping the paper record of her winnings into her pocket, the tapestry had been sold.
“I’ll keep a thirty-two gold sales commission, which leaves ninety for you,” Ana said, writing out a cheque while they walked. She tore the cheque away and handed it to Sebastien.
Sebastien stared at the numbers. “That thing can’t possibly be worth this much. I spent less than an hour on it, and the supplies probably cost less than a single gold.”
Alec nodded rapidly and pointed at Sebastien. “What he said. I mean, it was pretty, but kind of boring, don’t you think? It would have been better if he made the picture of something more interesting. Like a dragon breathing fire.”
“It was wonderful,” Brinn said, smiling at Sebastien reassuringly. “One of the best things I’ve seen all week.”
Ana’s honey-colored hair caught the light as she tilted her head, regarding her friend with amusement. “Oh, boys,” she said, her tone both patient and slightly condescending. “You’re thinking about this all wrong. This isn’t just a tapestry. It’s a luxury item, something unique that I’ve never seen before.” Ana’s eyes sparkled with enthusiasm as she continued, “And it’s not just about the tapestry itself. It’s about who made it. You’re moderately famous already, and under Thaddeus Lacer’s tutelage, you’re likely to become even more so. He just made an investment.”
“You’re saying that thing could be worth even more some day?”
Ana shrugged. “Sure. But that man isn’t just paying for the art. He’s paying for bragging rights, for a conversation piece among other wealthy people. It will make him seem interesting, well-connected, and insightful. It’s worth it.”
Sebastien stroked her chin as Ana’s words sank in. She found herself seriously considering asking Ana if the other young woman would like to open a tapestry shop together. The prospect of easy wealth dangling tantalizingly before her was almost too enticing to dismiss.
But then, Sebastien reminded herself of the cache of celerium hidden away, a treasure far more valuable than any tapestry she could make. And even with her reduced need for sleep, she was still already stretched thin between various projects. She had no time to start up a side business.
The Defensive Magic exam on Thursday, their last of the term, was once again set up as an exhibition. This time, however, the false terrain area created from white stone had been transformed into a dense forest. Well, a kind of forest, if that forest was drawn by a child who made cloud-like curves for the trees and bushes instead of any actual foliage. No one would be climbing within the branches.
‘The Defense exhibitions probably take more manpower than any other exhibition type,’ Sebastien mused. In addition to what it must have taken to mold the Flats into novel terrain every term, this exam had tons of proctors watching the students through spelled silver mirrors, ensuring that as few students as possible were critically injured, and making the whole thing into a huge show for the crowd, complete with betting.
This term, the contest resembled a game of capture the flag, with students divided into a dozen teams and competing against each other. Each team had a base, which had to be protected by an actively-cast shield. To “win” a team needed to end the exam with two base flags—huge, red, glowing flags on poles. If they were able to protect their own flag, that would count as one.
At least half of the teams today would lose. Probably more than that, as a few outliers collected more than two flags. Of course, even students from teams who had lost would still have a good chance to pass the exam based on their individual performance.
Sebastien did not have the luxury of choosing her role, like most of the other students.
Fekten had placed her on the shield spell. “You are to focus on protection, and nothing else. If I see any funny business from you, I’ll have you disqualified faster than you can cry about unfairness and discrimination,” he said.
Sebastien grimaced, but didn’t argue.
Fekten turned to walk away, but paused. “Siverling, do you know the fastest way to break your Will?”
“Opposing another thaumaturge’s Will,” she said.
“That is correct. The shield’s intermediary devices will protect you, but not completely.”
It was a warning, she thought, but it almost sounded like a threat. Fekten had never quite warmed up to her again after the previous term’s misunderstanding. She overheard Fekten instructing one of the test proctors to keep a close eye on her.
Despite the restrictions, Sebastien felt calm. If not for the fact that every team would probably have at least one upper-term student who was likely to take the shield-breaker role, this assignment would actually be advantageous for her, and she might have selected it anyway.
The shield spell was actually a two-way device, somewhat like the Henrik-Thompson artifact. Rather than merely attacking and defending as one would in a real battle, it was all channeled through a hip-height pillar at the edge of each base. The pillar somewhat adjusted the amount of power that needed to be channeled to achieve the same effect based on the student’s term, though it did not entirely even the playing field.
Sebastien thought she was quite powerful for a second-term student. In addition to that, maintaining or breaking the shield was not a matter of pure power, but a kind of mini-game in itself.
A “fire” shield was weak to a water attack, but strong against air. An earth shield was weak to air, but strong against light. Taking down the shield was as much a matter of being able to quickly drop one attack spell and start the next at maximum power as it was of sheer capacity.
As a clear bell started the test, Sebastien grasped her Conduit in one hand with obvious, pointed motions, just so no one could mistake her for not having one. She channeled a bit of energy into the air version of the shield—the better to see approaching danger through—and settled in to wait.
Sebastien’s team huddled together to strategize. Several agreed that they should send both of their upper-term students out on the attack team, which would increase their chances of capturing flags.
A young woman Sebastien didn’t recognize seemed perturbed by this, “But that’s a second-term student,” she said, pointing at Sebastien. “Are you really going to have him manage the shield alone?”
One of the upper term students patted her reassuringly. “That’s Sebastien Siverling.” He turned to Sebastien. “You can handle it, right?”
Sebastien nodded easily, suppressing a yawn. She could tell that the sleeping raven bound to her was beginning to fail under the accumulated fatigue. She would need to go to Liza’s and switch it out soon. “Well, probably. You should get two flags while you’re out, just in case.”
The upper term student smiled and pounded his fist into his open palm. “So, we’ll have three flags, total. We should bring those back to base for Siverling to protect, and if there’s time, we’ll go out for a fourth.”
A girl laughed dramatically, throwing back her head and half-covering an evil laugh. “Highest scoring team! Contribution points for everyone!”
Rhett was the only other student on Sebastien’s team that she recognized. He joined the attack group’s ranks, but didn’t seem particularly pleased about the situation. She thought she heard him muttering something like, “Not even a chance to show my leadership skills.”
It took a surprisingly short time for the first enemy team to arrive. A woman with a confident swagger approached, tapped her student token to the pillar, and launching her attack. Her teammates spread out, engaging Sebastien’s few remaining defenders while providing cover for their shield-breaker.
Sebastien’s opponent tried to take her by surprise, switching between three different attack elements within the first ten seconds. Sebastien had been a bit nervous, but at this, she calmed down. She countered each of the woman’s attempts to break through with ease. Mentally, Sebastien taunted her. ‘I haven’t even stopped casting my shadow-familiar spell. You’re just that inept.’
The woman’s initial confidence gave way to frustration and then astonishment as Sebastien had no trouble keeping up and showed no sign of fatigue.
Just as the shield-breaker had grown red-faced and seemed to be reaching the limits of her patience, a second enemy team charged out from between the white stone tree trunks, trapping the first enemy team between themselves and Sebastien’s base.
The chaos of battle intensified, with ultimately harmless spells flying in all directions. The first team was wiped out, down to the last.
One of the new arrivals came to challenge the shield. The man nodded congenially at her. “All alone, huh?”
Sebastien decided to boast, since this was only a game and didn’t really matter. “I alone am enough.” She almost blushed with regret, because it sounded much worse out loud.
The man started out tentatively, testing her skill. “You’re good,” he complimented.
Sebastien scowled at him.
Eventually, her opponent abandoned subtlety and began hammering at Sebastien’s shield with raw power.
Sweat beaded on Sebastien’s forehead, more from sheer effort than from the heat. She poured as much power as her Will could channel into the shield. She even dropped her shadow-familiar, just to have that slight extra edge.
But it was all for naught, and the harsh reality of her relative youth—her weakness—could not be denied. She could not beat this man in a straight fight.
Fortunately for her team, the attack group that had gone out returned before she could fail, holding two giant flags. They fell on her attackers with berserk screams, and one boy even dropped his battle artifact and started beating a girl about the shoulders with the captured flagstaff in his hands. “For glory! For the contribution points!” he bellowed.
With both numbers and force, they managed to halve the enemy’s numbers.
Sebastien’s opponent let out a disgruntled “tch” and ran off with the rest of his team when they escaped. He had been seconds away from overcoming the last threads of her resistance.
Sebastien sagged with exhaustion. Her mind felt stretched thin. “Don’t go out again,” she told them. “I can’t keep up the shield until the test ends.”
Rhett managed to convince a smaller group of students to leave the flags there and try for a fourth, but the majority stayed behind to help Sebastien defend.
They ended the exam with three flags, and when all the grading was done, Sebastien’s performance had earned her thirty contribution points for skill.
On Friday, with their exams completed, Sebastien and her friends found themselves free to enjoy the final day of the exhibitions like the other visitors. Thursday and Friday were geared towards showcasing the most impressive and powerful displays, many featuring students on the cusp of graduation who hoped to secure promising careers. The University, ever opportunistic, aimed to draw the largest crowds during this time, eagerly anticipating the mountains of silver and gold they would harvest from their students’ efforts.
Alec’s eyebrows seemed almost electrified, wild with excitement as he dashed up to them and pulled them all to look at the new prizes that had been added to the display in the Great Hall.
The grand showcase of everything available for contribution points served a dual purpose: it was both a bragging opportunity for the University to impress visitors, and a tantalizing enticement for students to earn more contribution points.
Alec stood with his hands clasped together as if in prayer, drooling at an entire suit of armor imbued with the energy of the Planes of Earth and Fire, a masterpiece created by none other than Archmage Zard himself.
Sebastien could admit that the craftsmanship was intricate, and a palpable magical energy seemed to emanating from its smoldering surface. “What is Archmage Zard’s specialty? Is he an artificer?”
Damien grinned. “Among other things. I think he’s most famous for being an ‘elementalist,’” he said, adding air quotes with his fingers.
Alec nodded. “He’s done something famous with fire, earth, air, and water.”
“Not Radiance?” Waverly asked.
“Not yet,” Alec said. “I’m not sure what he would do with it. He likes to make stuff like this for the students, but that’s mostly just a hobby. What he’s really good at is affecting a huge area with gradual, powerful effects. Like smothering forest fires or diverting rivers. I heard one time he picked up a mountain and moved it. It took him three days.”
“That didn’t happen,” Brinn said confidently. “Even Archmage Zard can’t pick up a mountain. Maybe he scooped out chunks of it, piece by piece, and managed to move it that way.”
“I’ve met him,” Damien said. “He’s not as interesting as Professor Lacer. He’s an old man. The kind that hands out hard candies to children, even when they’re already teenagers. If he were poor, he’d be the kind of man that pops out his wooden dentures to shock his grandchildren.”
Ana nodded nonchalantly. “He gave me a candy one time, but the wrapper had fallen off, and it was all covered in lint from his pocket. He free-cast a spell to clean it, and told me not to waste perfectly good candy.”
“I’ve seen him around, but I’ve never met him,” Waverly said. “He has an interest in rare magical species, I think. Sometimes he brings them home from his travels.” She sighed wistfully.
Sebastien wondered if she might have encountered the renowned Archmage on the University grounds without realizing it. If he looked like any other old man, she might have simply ignored him. “Is he attending the exhibitions?”
Alec shook his head. “No, the High Crown sent him off to rescue some village that was hit by a mudslide. He’s, like, building houses out of wood and digging supports and stabilizers into some mountainside.”
Brinn’s attention was captivated by a glass jar of what looked like herbal tea leaves. “I heard that Archmage Zard once saved an entire village from starvation in just three days.”
“How?” Waverly asked, picking up a delicate crystal wand whose display very clearly said, “Do Not Touch” and waving it around. “Wait, no, let me guess. He grew giant magical pumpkins?”
“Oh, me too!” Alec said. “Did he…water their fields with the blood of their enemies?”
Brinn shot him a look of disgust. “No. Shut up, you two. The village was on the coast, and had been hit by a sea storm. There were rumors the storm was magically empowered by a beast of the deep, but anyway, all of their crops had failed, and they were running out of food. Archmage Zard showed up with nothing but a sack of seeds.”
Brinn took the wand out of Waverly’s hand and placed it gently back in its spot. “He didn’t just plant a few fields. No, he created an entire agro-forestry farm around the village. We’re talking edible plants, bushes, and trees, all growing together in perfect harmony.”
Ana interjected, “But how could he make them grow so quickly?”
Brinn grinned, clearly relishing the opportunity to explain. “That’s the brilliance of it! No one knows! I have several theories. I think he might have used a combination of growth acceleration spells and some kind of sympathetic link absorbing the fruitfulness of some other region where the seeds came from. The villagers said it was like watching a hundred years pass in the blink of an eye. By the third day, they had a sustainable food source that will last for generations.”
Sebastien turned her attention to the prize book, flipping through the pages of items not physically on display. Her eyes scanned the listings, searching for the section on private rooms.
She frowned. “Five hundred points for a private room?” That was beyond what she could afford. Sighing, she flipped to the next page, which detailed the four-bedroom apartments. The individual bedrooms were only about twice as big as their current cubicles, but it also offered a shared living area. The price, while still steep, was only twice that of a single room.
Damien peeked around Sebastien’s shoulder and then took on a contemplative look.
Sebastien’s pocket vibrated as the alarm spell she had placed on her pocket watch went off. All other thoughts fell from her head. She sucked in a breath of excitement. “It’s time!” she told the others, and then hurried off, heedless of if they were following her.
The sun had climbed high in the sky, and the most widely advertised showcase of these exhibitions was about to begin. Sebastien wouldn’t miss it for anything.
After all, Thaddeus Lacer had volunteered to give an exhibition.
Author Note:
Just a heads up in advance, for anyone who has been waiting for the next Catastrophe Collector spinoff book, I am postponing that release. I have already almost finished the book, but I don't have the spare couple of weeks needed to release it on time (unless I want to work 10-12 hour days for those weeks). I'll be slowly serializing it for the Patreon and then publishing it next year, instead.
Some of you have given me gentle advice and reminders to take it easy, not to burn out, etc. Thank you. I am not very good at resting, but recently I had an epiphany, which may seem kind of obvious. It was not obvious to me, despite how simple it is.
It was "If you're tired, you should do less work. Not try to optimize everything, including your rest, so that you can secretly do more work in less time. To properly rest, why don't you experiment with doing the least possible amount of work for an extended period instead." This is part of an attempt at that.
It's immensely relieving to think that I have actual rest scheduled, and not only that, but that my goal is not to sneakily "get ahead" and work more, but to work as little as possible. It's anathema, it's crazy, but I am looking forward to seeing if it will get me back to 100% creative energy levels over time. I have been tired for a long time now.
Comments
I don't think it's creepy and it's a reasonable question to ask. I remember Sebastian freaking out about the transformation changing her brain chemistry and I thought it was a valid fear. If she truly changes her physiology every time she switches, her endocrine system must be apoplectic. What happens when she's supposed to have her menses but she is in Sebastians form? What about things like mass and height differences affecting her metabolism?. The pituitary gland releases LH in both sexes but it does different things in either. What about changes in body fat distribution between sexes and hormone production like estrogen, ghrelin and lectin? Is one form more insulin resistant? What effect does elevated testosterone have on her female form? Is it like a pause button on her physiology when she changes between forms? Cause that sounds like a nightmare to keep track of. But that wouldn't make sense since wounds travel between them. Further, what about cutting hair? Does hair in both bodies grow at the same rate? Does growth pause when she is not in one of the forms? If physiology remained biologically consistent, and endocrine function transferred between forms. Both of her forms would slowly creep towards adrogeny because of the disproportionate hormone balance. Thicker skin, deeper voice and more hair growth as siabhon, higher body fat, breast tissue development and denser bones as Sebastian. All great things to think about.
Emma Mass
2024-11-04 06:55:54 +0000 UTCThis would be a funny juxtaposition between the two. Siabhon using the darkness:shadow familiar. Sebastian using light based magic: gesturan techniques, the dazzler, illusions. It can help separate their identities I guess. It's also incredibly ironic😂
Emma Mass
2024-11-04 06:44:03 +0000 UTC“No, the High Crown sent him off to rescue some village that was hit by a mudslide. He’s, like, building houses out of wood and digging supports and stabilizers into some mountainside.” Oh no. I think Zard might be heading to Ossham
hhttghlk
2024-11-01 13:34:33 +0000 UTCI just got a similar question on my website, so I'm copying and pasting my answer: I am in Idaho. This time zone is generically called Mountain Time (MT). Specifically, it is Mountain Standard Time (MST) when observing standard time, and Mountain Daylight Time (MDT) when observing daylight saving time. Alternatively, you could track it with UTC−07:00/DST UTC−06:00.
Azalea Ellis
2024-10-18 01:27:53 +0000 UTCThat probably sounds creepy but it just makes me wonder cause it would diminish the awesomeness of the magic if it caused that difficulty.
Jordan Rogers
2024-10-18 00:52:49 +0000 UTCI had anatomy question as Sebastian is she fully functional in that regard and in her normal form is there any issues with her monthly cycle being as she’s a man most of the time?
Jordan Rogers
2024-10-18 00:51:46 +0000 UTCWhat time zone is the weekly chapter release time ? Some reason I was thinking it was mountain time..
Jordan Rogers
2024-10-18 00:47:49 +0000 UTCI invite you to Puerto Rico for a vacation.
Rawbi Redrafe
2024-10-13 17:44:49 +0000 UTCIt’s easy to remember everything when you reread the books multiple times 😂
Hannah
2024-10-12 23:49:46 +0000 UTCOh c’mon. I know people are really trying for Damien to be besotted with Sebastien, but like, has no one ever had a friend that they love hanging around because they’re interesting and get into crazy situations? I went out for an evening walk with my best friend when we were teenagers in a family friendly park and ended up running into a group of Satanists trying to find a spot for a ritual. Like, I was not in love with her at all, but she was pure chaos and so fun to be around. It was exciting to be with her because there was always something to do. Damien clearly feels that way about Sebastien - he gets to do detective work, unearth huge secrets, go on adventures, break into houses, spy on police investigations - he’s having the time of his life. Rooming with a friend at university, especially such an exciting friend, would be a no brainer.
Hannah
2024-10-12 23:46:18 +0000 UTCI mean, it seems likely that she is going to try to go in ~250 points each and get a 4-bedroom apartment with her friends. I would guess Damien, Ana, and Brinn, since I can't imagine that Alec or Waverly have enough points to contribute.
Keid
2024-10-12 16:27:12 +0000 UTCAs exciting as all of those things are, I am very glad that you are pacing yourself and scheduling yourself some rest.
Keid
2024-10-12 16:17:24 +0000 UTCI’ll just add this: that is the single easiest sale of art for value I’ve ever heard of. This is maybe the most proof of Sebastien’s reputation as any single piece of evidence up to this point. It beats Alexander Calder showing up to an art gallery with a bundle of wire. At this rate, it won’t be long before newspapers in Lenore call for Sebastien to seek out and capture the Raven Queen. If she is a master of the plane of darkness, surely he’ll be a master of the plane of radiance? Doesn’t the light defeat the darkness?
JKlarinet
2024-10-12 08:25:46 +0000 UTCI had a stray thought & chuckle today thinking about the girl's lewd outburst.... Sebastien should give a demonstration of the Light Refinement spell (Dance?) for the crowd, scantily clad of course... sounds like he'd give everybody something to talk about and win lots more contribution points, Damian would be pissed if he missed Sebastien's secret spell demonstration
Jim A
2024-10-12 06:49:17 +0000 UTCWord choice question: “Sebastien did not have the luxury of choosing her role, like most of the other students.” - Did you mean “unlike”? That is, she is unlike the other students. Or, “Unlike most of the other students, Sebastien did not have the luxury of choosing her role.”
JKlarinet
2024-10-12 01:03:04 +0000 UTCIt sounds like you might need to start a publishing company and delegate all that other translation and promotion work
JKlarinet
2024-10-12 01:01:53 +0000 UTCsooo when is Damien gonna stop simping/pseudo-stalking Sebastien? Asking to be roommates to be closer to your crush is reeeaally reaching the limits of something
Notcreepycreeper
2024-10-11 20:39:19 +0000 UTCHannah has the right of it. Chapter 90, On the Nature of Shadows. Hannah is also some kind of Loremaster. I swear she remembers everything.
Azalea Ellis
2024-10-11 16:42:14 +0000 UTCShe’s earned 180 so far from exhibitions, I believe she gets 100 if she’s in the top of her year, so 280, plus 30 from the defence exam so 310, however many she’s gained from her classes over the term. So realistically, I think she might actually scrape up enough, especially if she gets a couple more exhibitions.
Hannah
2024-10-11 16:39:45 +0000 UTCLacer had a chapter where he specifically mentioned that sleep was one of his free indulgences and he didn’t want to give it up.
Hannah
2024-10-11 16:34:27 +0000 UTCMoar book moar better! Give us the Ana subplots, because I know that girl is always plotting! (I joke, mostly, I’m aware about the benefits of focus and brevity, but I know I’ll throw money at your books whatever the length).
Hannah
2024-10-11 16:32:40 +0000 UTCWell it sounds like you have a plan to help keep all that work under control. Good luck. Fight on! And relax when needed!
David Brims
2024-10-11 16:21:49 +0000 UTCThanks! Just to clarify, though, I do plan to continue releasing the weekly chapter, with a couple small planned breaks next year. (4-6 weeks) Writing takes up about 50% of my work time, and I have a lot of other admin, marketing, and management stuff that I do, too. It's a lot of work to run a small business. I'm going to be cutting other planned projects, marketing, and stuff like that, and then only trying to write a little over 200,000 words next year, rather than the 300,000 I was originally aiming for. I had originally wanted to get further ahead on PGTS, write about 20,000 words of bonus content, and also write the third Catastrophe Collector book. I can't do all of that any more. I'll also be cutting my plans for German translations, a big marketing push with some cool promotions, and the special edition hardcovers I've been wanting to get to for a while now, with Kickstarter launch. I still want to do all of that, eventually. It'll just take some time.
Azalea Ellis
2024-10-11 16:06:36 +0000 UTCAna is going to get some more screen time this book, again. I always want to do more with her, but I keep running into book length constraints that make it difficult to justify adding another subplot.
Azalea Ellis
2024-10-11 15:53:37 +0000 UTCShe should refer to herself as a woman, in any body. Other people should refer to her as whatever gender they perceive her as. However, she should be switching between names for herself depending on her body. In this chapter, She/Her/Sebastien, (if I haven't screwed anything up. Sometimes I slip.)
Azalea Ellis
2024-10-11 15:51:58 +0000 UTCI surely will be doing that, too.
Azalea Ellis
2024-10-11 15:48:33 +0000 UTCI think you're right about the identity, but not the gender. She thinks about herself as Sebastian or Siobhan depending on her current form, but consistently refers to herself in whatever form
Pedro Manoel Fabiano Alves Evangelista
2024-10-11 12:09:50 +0000 UTCYes she’s been casting almost on stop for several months
Jordan Rogers
2024-10-11 11:15:25 +0000 UTCLacer already knows Sebastian is using the sleep proxy spell. I’m surprised he hasn’t tried to get the spell himself, but maybe he has stronger inhibitions about using blood magic on ravens.
James Barclay
2024-10-11 10:03:00 +0000 UTCThanks, that cleared it
Lendon Shurt
2024-10-11 08:33:54 +0000 UTCOh Azalea, your epiphany made me laugh. You were so very like Siobhan in that moment - didn’t she completely struggle with this a few books ago and never figure it out until Ilma and Ana gave her a hand? Anyway, thank you for the chapter! I was too tired to stay up and wait for it to drop but it’s a lovely start to my Friday instead. The exhibitions and exams have been so much fun. Also, I’m not so convinced Fekten hates her so much and gave her shield duty as a punishment. I suspect he sees her as one of those green, brilliant but overconfident recruits he probably worked with during the war and is trying to make sure she’ll survive in the real world.
Hannah
2024-10-11 08:28:34 +0000 UTCGreat chapter ! Always a great start on Fridays!
Calle
2024-10-11 08:04:20 +0000 UTCOn the last Fekten's exam she cast with a hidden conduit and they thought she was using her body and broke her Will.
Artem Mateush
2024-10-11 07:59:29 +0000 UTCAna has too little screen time to have a chance in that aspect, imo. (More Ana screentime would be nice though.)
Pete
2024-10-11 06:38:24 +0000 UTCDuring rest time you can read some other webnovel and give us good recommendations :)
conkerer
2024-10-11 06:37:19 +0000 UTCYou know, you can also optimize your rest too! I would think about it like how athletes and bodybuilders look at it, for optimal growth you want focused training and good rest at healthy ratios, and by good rest I mean stretching, meditating, long baths, watching TV, long walks, spending time with family, etc. You can totally put more effort into optimizing your rest, it won't make it so you need less rest, but it will make you feel better after.
conkerer
2024-10-11 06:36:21 +0000 UTCHonestly! I crave morr Ana & Sebastian interactions! Heck, I would love for her to run into the RQ at some point, too😭🤣
Red_Moon
2024-10-11 05:43:20 +0000 UTCCan someone please remind me what is the deal with Fekten again? Struggling to remember
Lendon Shurt
2024-10-11 05:39:36 +0000 UTCtyfc, the tapestry part was really nice
Ulsar
2024-10-11 04:37:28 +0000 UTCI've really enjoyed this chapter and the previous one. The impromptu exhibitions by S have all been fun. I could almost see the tapestry (wonderful). I found a few things on a second read: “Tentatively, be brushed a finger along the tree’s translucent surface leaves.” – 'be' should be 'he' “Ana’s honey-colored hair caught the light as she tilted her head, regarding her friend with amusement. “Oh, boys,” she said,” – should friend be plural friends? “A woman with a confident swagger approached, tapped her student token to the pillar, and launching her attack.” – 'launching' should be 'launched'? “Sebastien could admit that the craftsmanship was intricate, and a palpable magical energy seemed to emanating from its smoldering surface.” – ‘to emanating from’ should either be ‘to emanate from’ or ‘to be emanating from’
Melinda Hutson
2024-10-11 04:19:27 +0000 UTCDon't know as I don't remember an explicit mention. In the comments in the previous chapter when various people brought up inconsistent pronouns, Azalea said "The he/she stuff I noticed I was doing a couple times, but didn't know how egregious it was. It happens generally when I'm spending a lot of time thinking about events from someone else's perspective. A lot of this chapter I was thinking about how Sebastien was perceived from outsiders, and how to hint at stuff that Sebastien wasn't picking up herself, and apparently it led to a lot of pronoun issues. " I took that to mean that Sebastien is referred to by "he" by others, but refers to themself as "she".
Melinda Hutson
2024-10-11 04:14:56 +0000 UTCReally loving these last couple chapters. The payoff of getting to see Siobhan just casually blowing everyone away is *chef's kiss*
chumponimys
2024-10-11 04:07:18 +0000 UTCSounds like no penthouse any time soon, sadly: "She frowned. 'Five hundred points for a private room?' That was beyond what she could afford."
chumponimys
2024-10-11 03:59:34 +0000 UTCI'm 99% certain that they think of themselves as what gender they are currently in, it was explicitly mentioned in a previous chat also
Cole
2024-10-11 03:46:34 +0000 UTCPronouns are correct if chapter is from Sebastien's point of view. S thinks of herself as she/her -- even in Sebastien's body
Melinda Hutson
2024-10-11 03:45:46 +0000 UTCThe pronouns are wrong again 😔 start of the chapter has "her" when describing Sebastian
Cole
2024-10-11 03:17:13 +0000 UTCOkay, if the Damien fanclub can make a big deal out of Damien blushing at seeing a barely-clothed Sebastien, then I, as a member of the Ana fan club, can make a big deal out of: "She found herself seriously considering asking Ana if the other young woman would like to open a tapestry shop together." That has to be the most sapphic line of the series so far.
Keid
2024-10-11 02:33:43 +0000 UTCShe cast it in the morning to have it all day to train
Adspartan
2024-10-11 02:01:25 +0000 UTCAfter the fight with the Red Guard at the end of the last book she started keeping the spell on at all times to stop what ever is in her head taking control of it. Her actual casting of the spell isn't written most of the time but I'd assume it's in use unless its specifically called out that its been dropped.
Lizard Wizard
2024-10-11 02:00:37 +0000 UTCI'm glad you're resting a bit!
fubar
2024-10-11 01:59:11 +0000 UTCYes, please rest. I'd rather have half as many chapters over the next year, than have those chapters in the first half and then have you burn out. Keep taking care of yourself please!!!
David Brims
2024-10-11 01:42:54 +0000 UTCI really like this chapter, will be interesting to see how Sebastian’s performances will affect future interactions with his teachers. I think lacer will end up with questions on how he has progressed so much in so many areas.
Jordan Rogers
2024-10-11 01:35:18 +0000 UTCShould either be, to emanate, or to be emanating from the following passage Sebastien could admit that the craftsmanship was intricate, and a palpable magical energy seemed to emanating from its smoldering surface. “What is Archmage Zard’s specialty? Is he an artificer?”
Jordan Rogers
2024-10-11 01:31:33 +0000 UTCI'm missing something. When did she initially cast the shadow familiar spell and why? Was it to practice dual casting in a way no one would notice?
Drew Teter
2024-10-11 01:30:52 +0000 UTCThe mythos of Sebastian Silverlimg continues to grow. The history books looking back on it all will definitely be interesting, especially if her double identity ever becomes known to the common man.
James Barclay
2024-10-11 01:29:56 +0000 UTCFekten is really holding that grudge x)
Adspartan
2024-10-11 01:09:57 +0000 UTC:)
ShadyTundra
2024-10-11 00:55:10 +0000 UTCMore exhibitions ? Damn she's going to have a penthouse with her points :p
Adspartan
2024-10-11 00:54:38 +0000 UTC