Chapter 182 - Harbinger
Added 2023-10-19 23:09:35 +0000 UTCThaddeus
Month 4, Day 10, Saturday 10:00 a.m.
“I apologize, your Eminence,” the lead healer said, using a somewhat archaic title as he bowed repeatedly to the High Crown. He shot a glance toward Jorgensen that clearly said he wished he could physically shut the hysterical man’s mouth. “A reaction to the mix of potions, perhaps. His mind is volatile and weak at the moment.”
Grimly, the High Crown nodded to the head healer, and their group hurried out at a speed just below a run, carrying Mr. Jorgensen with them. They should have known better than to play games of loyalty and subversion with the Raven Queen. That they had hoped to loosen her grip on her allies by showing them her weakness was delicious irony, considering the reactions of the operatives who had interacted most closely with her.
Had the Raven Queen truly done something more nefarious to Jorgensen, or was this another decoy, serving multiple purposes and drawing their attention away from her true intention? Thaddeus looked around again. If he were trying to play the sort of game she loved so much, it would be not Jorgensen who was the delayed-trigger poison, but one of the others. One who did not even know it.
With Jorgensen gone, the conjecture grew only more outlandish, with the consensus leaning increasingly toward some kind of Aberrant influence. It might have even been due to some subconscious desire to foist the problem of dealing with her off on someone else. The High Crown, at least, had long been attempting to increase his power over Thaddeus’s independent organization, and he might see this as an opportunity.
Thaddeus remained silent unless specifically questioned. He was not convinced, again for lack of sufficient and untainted evidence, but it would explain much. If a powerful sorceress had somehow bound the service of an Aberrant, one lucid enough to follow commands and restrain itself when necessary, together most of the feats she had displayed could be explained. After all, Aberrants were not constrained to the limits of mortal sorcery.
Thaddeus would not reveal the secrets of the Red Guard to these people by suggesting such, nor add weight to their speculation, but it was inevitable that the Red Guard would also realize this possibility. And they would not be pleased. Thaddeus’s attempts to divert them would be for naught. They would investigate.
The talking went on for hours, occasionally interspersed with updates from the ongoing investigation. The Pendragon Corps had tried to find the people they had kidnapped—or at least the families of those people—without any luck. Their homes showed signs that they had left in a hurry, and even under pressure their neighbors could only say that enforcers from the Verdant Stag and Nightmare Pack had helped load clothes and other emergency belongings into a carriage a few hours before.
This was no surprise. The coppers might have arrived sooner, if the Pendragon operatives had actually known exactly who they kidnapped along with the children.
They had also had no luck finding the woman Silvia Nakai. Records showed that she had worked at the Silk Door for a time, but that establishment was notoriously tight-lipped. If Silvia Nakai was Siobhan Naught, as Thaddeus suspected, it was even less likely that they would ever catch her.
Titus’s thoughts seemed to be running along a similar path. “Siobhan Naught was seemingly a normal young girl, according to her father and those around her, until suddenly she began to display abilities beyond any realistic capabilities for one of her age and background. This sudden shift simply…doesn’t make sense. Is it possible that something similar has happened to Silvia Nakai?”
“What if…” a woman started, and then shook her head.
“Speak,” the High Crown ordered wearily.
The woman looked around, then cleared her throat awkwardly. “What if the Raven Queen is actually someone, or some thing, that the expedition brought back from the Black Wastes? In that case, Siobhan Naught and Silvia Nakai would both be…victims.”
In essence, the woman was suggesting that the Raven Queen herself was some sort of lucid Aberrant, though whether this would be in addition to the shadow Aberrant, Thaddeus did not know.
“We should watch the rumors for insight,” the advisor who had supposedly profiled the Raven Queen’s personality said. “The ones that appear first, before they have a chance to mutate as they pass from ear to ear, are most likely to be information from the Raven Queen’s allies. The ones who were there, and those closest to them.”
The suggestion made Thaddeus consider something that no one had brought up. If the Raven Queen had “followers,” could it be in a more direct sense than people who prayed to her and passed around rumors about her activities? Could she perhaps be building her own organization, independent from the Verdant Stag or the Nightmare Pack? No doubt, if this was the case, the woman would be filling the ranks with only the best.
And it would also explain at least a few of the feats she’d flaunted, in a totally mundane, if quite clever manner.
The group argued about almost everything. The only thing they could agree on was that, except for confirmation of alternative levers that might move her, they were, in fact, worse off than they had been before. The High Crown descended into a deep brooding mood.
“We will still prepare to catch her if she attempts to free Ennis Naught,” Titus offered, though it was obvious he held little hope for this.
The High Crown shooed them out with an irritated wave of his hand, and the Pendragon operatives ushered everyone except a couple of personal guards from the room.
Titus was somewhat awkward on the ride back.
Thaddeus could understand the younger man’s desire to offer the High Crown something that would ease his displeasure, but he did not appreciate the words being stolen from his own lips. Thaddeus exited the carriage at the University without breaking the silence. Once there, the first thing he did was check on his apprentice.
Thaddeus first went to the library, and then the dorms, and then cafeteria. Eventually, his stomach sinking, he tried the infirmary. Through a gap in the curtained pseudo-cubicle, he spied Sebastien’s shockingly light hair. The boy had a half-finished mug of nourishing draught in one hand and a weary tilt in his neck. Still, he flashed the healer attending him a small smile, and the grim-faced woman let out an exasperated huff.
Thaddeus’s strode up to them, yanking the curtain aside and pulling it closed behind him. “What has happened?”
“Oh, it’s all the fault of that damn Raven Queen,” the healer said, clicking her tongue with displeasure.
Sebastien’s eyes widened with alarm. “Well, that’s not exactly—”
Thaddeus had already free-cast a diagnostic spell before remembering that the boy’s strange boon blocked divination. He ignored Sebastien’s flinch as he ruthlessly overpowered the effect. Thaddeus’s eyes narrowed as she looked over the results, illusory images and metrics scrolling through the air.
The healer raised one eyebrow. “Impressive, if somewhat obscure,” she commented. “I think I should clarify that the Raven Queen herself did not attack the boy. I realize my words could have been misconstrued. No need to worry about anomalous effects, torture, or…” She leaned closer, peering at the results over Thaddeus’s shoulder. “Hmm.” She shared a glance with Thaddeus, her lips pressing together.
“What? What is it?” Siverling asked, barely suppressing panic.
“It’s a concussion,” she said.
“Not Will-strain?” Thaddeus asked.
The woman turned to Sebastien. “You didn’t do any casting after you got your head knocked around, did you?”
“Of course not,” he replied immediately.
Thaddeus took a deep breath and pinched the bridge of his nose. Sebastien’s eyes had flicked subtly to the side, and his fingers had twitched. Thaddeus had noticed the boy’s habit of reaching for his Conduit whenever he felt the slightest bit uncomfortable. He gave Sebastien a pointed look.
Sebastien at least didn’t force Thaddeus to point out his lie verbally. “Well…I did cast onespell. Something to help with nightmares,” the boy admitted, almost mumbling.
The healer let out a low sound of sympathy, shooting another meaningful look at Thaddeus over Sebastien’s bowed head. “Mr. Siverling, like most of the rest of us, was out and about on Friday. When the raven clouds started gathering, some idiot panicked and started yelling about the end of days, and you know how it goes. People spooked. Mr. Siverling is so slight, he got knocked over easily. He took a bit of a trampling. He’s already had a high-strength, true healing potion, and that handled most of it, but he’s still experiencing some headaches.”
“The crowd…trampled you?” Thaddeus asked slowly, a strange pit forming in his stomach. He could imagine it. While he was watching the ravens dance in awe, Sebastien, always so confident and focused, was being knocked off balance by some hysterical, criminally self-absorbed savages. “You could have died.” Thaddeus had seen it happen at least half a dozen times.
Sebastien shifted uncomfortably, his lips moving as if to say something, but in the end he remained silent.
“I’m prescribing some anti-inflammatories, a regeneration-booster, and a few more nourishing draughts, in addition to the standard Will-strain regimen. You can take a bed here and sleep for the day, if you like, Mr. Siverling. I would normally prescribe a sleep-inducing potion, but I know of your…aversion. And don’t mention this to your friends, but I can have some of the better food delivered from the cafeteria.”
“I appreciate it, but no thank you,” Sebastien said, shaking his head and tugging his at the cuff of his sleeves.
“Are you sure? I know the basic meals are less than appealing. You’re just a little a little slip of a thing, a string bean! You’re practically wasting away.”
Her sincere concern slipped through in an accusing tone.
Sebastien drew himself up. “That’s not true. I’m all muscle!”
She raised one eyebrow and looked at Thaddeus. “Look at his cheeks. Gaunt.”
Sebastien touched his cheek. “I just have well-define cheekbones.”
“If this were a story, you would have ‘the consumption,’” the woman snapped back. Rather than continue to bicker with her patient, who was puffing himself up in outrage, she left them alone to retrieve the concoctions she had prescribed.
As soon as she was gone, Thaddeus cast his favorite sound-muffling spell. “Did you encounter the Raven Queen over the break at any time?”
Wide-eyed, Sebastien shook his head. “Did you?” he leaned forward with sudden fascination. The boy obviously wanted to ask for details about the spectacle, but Thaddeus waved him off.
Sebastien hesitated, and then asked, “Is there…anything wrong? You seemed to notice something from that divination spell. I mean, beside the obvious.”
Thaddeus did not cushion his words. “You are underweight. Or, more accurately, your body fat percentage is concerningly low, and you are anemic.”
Sebastien relaxed subtly. “Oh.”
Thaddeus scowled as a flash of anger ran through him. “This not a trivial matter. You are also dehydrated, your blood pressure is distressingly high, and your fingertips are trembling. When was the last time you ate something?”
The boy pressed his hands flat to his legs, halting the trembling. “Just a couple of hours ago. I had lunch in the cafeteria.”
“And before that?”
Sebastien’s hesitation was answer enough.
Before Thaddeus could speak again, the healer returned, and Thaddeus dropped his sound-muffling spell.
She handed Sebastien a linen satchel filled with small vials and larger bottles, rattling off instructions that the boy nodded along to. “I also included a refill of the anti-anxiety potion you were prescribed earlier this year. When you run out, come back for more.”
Sebastien chugged the remainder of his nourishing draught and, under the combines stares of the healer and Thaddeus, left the infirmary with his chin held defiantly high. Thaddeus was beginning to suspect that some of the boy’s haughtiness was actually a defense mechanism.
The healer crossed her arms and turned on Thaddeus as if he were an unruly student. “Youneed to be keeping an eye on your apprentice’s food intake. I’ve complained to the administration several times that the cafeteria’s restrictions are a problem. Just because it’s tradition doesn’t make it worthwhile. There are other, better ways to incentivize students to earn contribution points.”
“I will handle it,” Thaddeus promised.
She relaxed slightly. “And not just that. Mr. Siverling…might not be dealing with the trauma of his previous encounter with the Raven Queen as well as he seems to. You can’t tell me she wasn’t instrumental in his friend’s break event. And now, with the recent fracas, it must be stirring up memories. Anxieties. If it’s bad enough that he would risk Will-strain to avoid nightmares, I would suggest you consider sending him to a mind healer. He might not talk about it, but Mr. Siverling is an orphan. He doesn’t have anyone to look after him but you.”
Thaddeus wasn’t sure that Sebastien was so fearful of the Raven Queen as to have nightmares about her. If anything, it seemed the opposite. “I will speak to him,” he assured.
“You do that. I’d hate to look back on this moment and regret, wouldn’t you? Mr. Siverling is such a promising young man.”
“He could be great, one day,” Thaddeus agreed. “Truly exceptional.”
“I’d expect nothing less from your apprentice, Grandmaster Lacer,” she called over her shoulder, already walking away.
When Thaddeus finally arrived at his cottage, looking forward to nursing a cup of warmed cider while he decided how to deal with his apprentice, he found a letter. It was placed on the porch directly in front of his door rather than in the warded letter box.
The envelope was of black, of obviously expensive paper, and sealed with blood-red wax. There was no identifying stamp in the wax, no signature across the fold, and no address.
Thaddeus’s suspicion warred with a burgeoning excitement and a heady relief. She had not ignored him after all. Nevertheless, Thaddeus had experienced enough surprises and disappointments to learn caution. He cast a series of detection and divination spells. There was nothing suspicious. No hint of magic at all.
Thaddeus levitated the letter with a spell, walked inside, and sat down at his desk, staring at the velvet black paper floating in front of his face.
Carefully, he slid open the seal with his desk athame, careful not to break the wax as he separated it from the page. Damaging this letter in any way would be such a shame.
With the seal broken, he lowered the envelope to the desk and re-cast all of his detection spells, to the same result.
Finally, Thaddeus lifted up the envelope’s flap and pulled free a creamy white sheet. Black ink lines formed words in a simple and elegant hand.
You know who I am.
I heard you had an interest in meeting me. This more indirect form of communication must suffice, for after recents events, I believe I have made enough in-person appearances to last some time.
What do you want with me, Thaddeus Lacer?
If you wish to continue our communication, please pay tribute in knowledge:
What do you know of seals that could contain a being’s consciousness within a memory?
To respond, put your letter in the lock box at the first attached location. You may receive further communication from me at the second location.
Within the envelope, Thaddeus found a second, much smaller sheet of paper with the numbers of locked boxes at two different storage locations, along with two keys to fit them. Presumably, when he placed his response in the first box, it would be taken to another location for pickup by or delivery to the Raven Queen, and the same in reverse. She, who so hated to be tracked, would never allow herself to be so easily located.
Thaddeus considered attempting to do so anyway, but decided against it. He did not want to earn her ire now that he had finally made contact. He read over her request for tribute again. She had chosen her demand well, as surely the worth of Thaddeus’s knowledge outshone anything he might offer her. But why would she wish to know of such seals, specifically?
Thaddeus had dug into the Red Guard’s records of that Aberrant incident seven years ago, from which Siobhan Naught would be the only known survivor. This question could have something to do with her current situation, that Aberrant event, or even, perhaps, some intriguing research project of her own.
Was it possible that Siobhan Naught had been an experimental subject, with someone, perhaps Raz Kalvidasan, working to answer a similar question? Could she be a victim, as that advisor of the High Crown had suggested, perhaps picked for her bloodline? It was even possible that the question had something to do with whatever the creature of darkness had done to Jorgensen.
Again, Thaddeus attempted, with limited success, to resist his desire for rampant speculation. There were simply too many possibilities, and he had too little real information. She could have just as easily gotten some hint of a fascinating spell from Myrddin’s journal.
After all, it was the letter’s postscript that caught Thaddeus’s eye and set his heartbeat to racing.
P.S. — Have you yet made it past the first set of split glyphs? There is a trick to it.
Author Note: Thanks everyone for your feedback! I have been on a trip across the US for my father's memorial service so I haven't had a chance to reply, but I have read everything and it's given me some good ideas for tweaks to make during the final revision.
Comments
It DOES cause physical symptoms like that, but not only, which is why they can't just magic it away with some healing, and it requires rest time.
Azalea Ellis
2023-11-25 18:11:47 +0000 UTCIt should be covered in Book 5. I think I was originally going to have it during the Sowing Break, but changed my mind to hold it over the Summer Break.
Azalea Ellis
2023-11-25 18:10:29 +0000 UTCHey Jim, thought I replied to this earlier. But as always, thanks for noting stuff like this. It is just a nap, but I'm doing an Iteration pass through the last 20 or so chapters now, and this is one of the things I've made a note to improve clarity on.
Azalea Ellis
2023-11-25 18:08:21 +0000 UTCMaybe they will evolve into a larger group like the Little Rascals.. 😊
Jim A
2023-10-31 15:27:43 +0000 UTCI can't even begin to guess. 😂
Stefanie
2023-10-27 14:39:11 +0000 UTCBut where does Gideon factor in this miscreant gang of children? Because we are going to need Gideon, and his familiar. Fiery the Fearsome, for this.
Stefanie
2023-10-27 14:36:50 +0000 UTCI think it’s kinda funny S’s medical assessment shows that her blood pressure is distressingly high. Couldn’t imagine why that might be.
Amanda Dimitrov
2023-10-26 22:55:18 +0000 UTCHe seems to be totally disillusioned with most people but still desires company which is why he gets fixated on Sebastian/the raven queen
FuriousDee
2023-10-26 22:52:13 +0000 UTCI suspect that when we learn more about his backstory in the Haze wars and red guard we will better understand why he only cares for people he considers an equal.
FuriousDee
2023-10-26 22:49:43 +0000 UTC"Their homes showed signs that they had left in a hurry" so the families have been put into Nightmare Pack witness protection so to speak,.. Parker has a daughter- I wonder if she becomes the third member of the newly formed Miles/Theo gang... that would round out the little group nicely. Two boys to push and pull at each other and a girl to keep them grounded/balanced.. its a comfortable and time tested combination like Sebastien/ Damien/Anna.. ... even Harry/Ron/Hermione 😉
Jim A
2023-10-26 13:57:36 +0000 UTC" you are anemic".. ahh yes you are correct...blood..more blood! 😉
Jim A
2023-10-26 13:05:06 +0000 UTCI was a little surprised that they didn't jump on her escaping the sensory deprivation circle a little more fervently, something like no mere human should be able to simply crawl out of it unless possessed by a supernatural force or she must be a super human/aberrant hybrid ...blah blah blah... that feat seemed oververshadowed (no pun intended) completely by her shadow familiar. I myself thought it showed more unexpected power than anything else she has done lately... not that I don't absolutely love the new things she can do with her shadow.....maybe all this drama was simply covered in all the conversations had over the hours there at the castle and possibly Azalea didn't want to belabor the topic too much and make the chapter too long... still a great chapter !! 😀
Jim A
2023-10-25 12:04:33 +0000 UTCThe divination diverting ward draws on her own blood for power. Blood is not made with nothing by our bodies - it requires protein and calories, aka food. S has been using that ward an awful lot recently, leading to an immediate lack of blood (anemia) as well as the long term effects of a lack of body reserves (fat).
rhekke
2023-10-24 13:53:23 +0000 UTC“You do that. I’d hate to look back on this moment and regret, wouldn’t you?” From the healer to Thaddeus Shouldn’t this be “on this moment and regret IT” or “on this moment WITH regret”?
Briar
2023-10-24 01:43:15 +0000 UTCI think S mentions the "Trick" because she wants to show Lacer she has accomplished something he hasn't and to humble him a bit. This could help her stay in the peer column longer and garner more respect with the man. She also may want to spark a dialog up about the book. I think it was brilliant downplaying split casting and letting him think she had fully decrypted the book without actually saying it... it will drive him crazy trying to catch up. Do they belong to an elite book club now 🤔 😉
Jim A
2023-10-22 14:58:33 +0000 UTCMe too
Jim A
2023-10-22 14:54:24 +0000 UTCIf that is the case it needs to be made a bit clearer in the writing....it says she went to Sleep " after casting her dream spell " just like every other time she is turning in for the night in these books, it just left me thinking ... OK what day is it when Lacer is in the infirmary with Sébastien... because the next morning she is to go with Liza so it felt wrong... I even was compelled to go back to both chapters to make sure it was the same day and I wasn't missing something. These books are very good at not leaving holes or paradoxes in the writing and everything in the sequences usually feel "Smooth"... I felt a problem as I read it -it wasn't smooth and it felt important.... that's why I mentioned it. If it is truly a nap she is taking it doesn't read that way..... but i agree after a hard night and trying to re-coup a Nap could work.
Jim A
2023-10-22 14:50:22 +0000 UTC"shaking his head and tugging his at the cuff of his sleeves." The second "his".
Keid
2023-10-22 11:15:18 +0000 UTC"for after recents events," should presumably be "for after recent events," and "Thaddeus’s eyes narrowed as she looked over the results" should be "he" unless he was responding to the healer reading them, in which case maybe some reference to her doing that should be added?
Keid
2023-10-22 11:10:36 +0000 UTCIn the diagnostic spell paragraph thaddeus is referred to as "she" once. Or alternatively it reads as thaddeus looking at the spell but it is intended to be the healer.
Kaelik
2023-10-22 06:46:50 +0000 UTCI think that her split will predates the amulet. It answers the question I always had of why did this easily accessible amulet not get discovered by the people looking over the books. I think the amulet only comes out if it reads a split will signature. We've also never seen anyone else try to use the amulet, it may also only trigger on split will. Would be interesting to see.
Kaelik
2023-10-22 06:40:57 +0000 UTCI guess what i meant is that split casting the glyphs is exactly how the book was meant to be unlocked (presumably), rather than using some clever uninteded trick to bypass that protection.
2023-10-21 20:34:33 +0000 UTCAt the moment we don’t know if S’s ability to split cast is related to: her bloodline, an encounter with the aberrant, the shape changing amulet or simply the fact that she didn’t know that it’s impossible hence didn’t develop that mental block in young age the same as with casting through other parts of her body other than hands. If it’s the last one then it could fall under a trick as it is the trick i.e. overcoming your own mental block. I do think that mentioning this “trick” in the letter to Lacer is intentional attempt at manipulation. S knows that Lacer already discounted possibility of actual split will hence this comment will send him in the completely wrong direction buying S more time to crack the journal herself and having some leverage in further dealings with Lacer.
Rafał Trzeciak
2023-10-21 19:14:00 +0000 UTCI wonder if She will need to balance her time spent between the bodies more evenly or perhaps just simply less time as Sébastien and eat more while in her original form... Maybe the wieght loss is just a symptom of all the Thaums she is constantly casting and she just needs to eat much more? That and conduits and beast cores don't carry many calories 😉
Jim A
2023-10-21 15:04:04 +0000 UTCAfter binging the last 12 chapters it getting crazy the theories that people are coming up with in the story. It feels just like myridin and how he has crazy legends about him.
LEMON
2023-10-21 07:07:28 +0000 UTCI think Sebastien went to sleep, so Lacer finds her that evening after her long nap finally getting the treatment she should have gotten in her last POV chapter.
Jonathan Gordy
2023-10-21 04:01:05 +0000 UTCWell, the history department knows, the high crown seemed to know, and everyone else in the room at the meeting would know. By the time Lacer gets the letter, the list of people who know would be very long. The Raven Queen will seem even more connected than ever. And, S. has luckily played into Lacer’s suspicions that she has spies feeding her information. Lacer doesn’t seem to be interested in ratting her out, so Sebastian isn’t going to come under increased scrutiny.
Jonathan Gordy
2023-10-21 03:56:44 +0000 UTCYes this is the chapter I was waiting for! One point of feedback from my end - I do think the multiple high crown chapters could be condensed into 1.
Satya Prateek
2023-10-21 01:14:24 +0000 UTCI find that I also enjoy the different point of view. However, I don’t care for him as much now. The glimpse into his thoughts and his disregard of the casual soldiers he killed make him problematic for me. I like his character, but he has some serious issues.
BLead
2023-10-20 18:02:39 +0000 UTCI found it interesting and somewhat strange that Shiobhan would call split casting a "trick", because it's not really a trick, is it. In ch. 160 Thaddeus says "I am still unconvinced that there is no trick that would allow a single person to input the key." - speaking about the glyphs. And now in the letter she says "Have you yet made it past the first set of split glyphs? There is a trick to it." I really like this bit, whether it is intentional or not. It's kinda fun seeing how she uses Thaddeus' own words while he's completely clueless.
2023-10-20 16:48:29 +0000 UTCSo many Thaddeus-chapters lately. You are truly spoiling us. I'm looking forward to how he will eventually reconcile all those feelings he is developing for Sebastian and the Raven Queen. Additionally, with each of these chapters my curiosity about Thaddeus' past (especially his friendship with Damien's late mother) is growing. I wonder how he ended up at this tragic point of emotional and (to some extend) intellectual isolation. Maybe his new pen pal can help a bit with that. I'm sure much more hilarity will commence at this front.
Anna
2023-10-20 16:02:43 +0000 UTCUps, sorry. First time commenting on Patreon. I love this Story, it's one of the best I have ever read. Just wanted to say thank you and tell you how much this Story means to me. I also wanted to share an idea that I have, what you might be planning and setting up already and if not feel free to take inspiration or not. I always love the twist and things you write anyway. So it is about the "blessing" the Raven Queen gave to Sebastian. Thadeus wants to communicate with the Raven Queen and in this chapter we see the beginning. (loved it) my idea is that at one point if Sebastian is in a precarious situation because Thadeus suspects him for something or Thadeus inevitably wants a meeting she can change her appearance in front of him and reveal that the Raven Queen "blessed" Sebastian to come in contact with him. Because now she can come and go in places in Sebastian form without anybody suspecting anything from her divination ward because Sebastian already has a similar one even if much weaker. The shapechange will show him that she is the real deal and she can empower her ward so he can't get through. But I also see problems with this method so take what I say as just the rambling of a fan.
2023-10-20 11:56:15 +0000 UTCHi
2023-10-20 11:30:19 +0000 UTCHow many people know Lacer is working on decrypting the other journals? He told Sebastian, but the Raven Queen knowing might be out of left field for him, making the other researchers and Sebastian seem suspicious. Excellent chapter thanks! S must have been rather guilty thinking about how she was casting non-stop during her escape, I do wonder how much Lacer sees through his apprentice.
James Barclay
2023-10-20 10:05:47 +0000 UTCI was looking forward towards Lacer-RQ communication for ages! I was wondering how you will bring it about. I love how S uses her knowledge of Lacer to lure him in with that P.S. message. As always well worth it waking up half an hour earlier on Friday morning just to read it.
Rafał Trzeciak
2023-10-20 06:20:29 +0000 UTCI’ve been meaning to ask: does will strain basically cause brain swelling? it’s very concussion-like
Jonathan Gordy
2023-10-20 05:50:48 +0000 UTCA question unrelated to this chapter: will the next arc cover the Gervin Soiree or will something else happen before that?
Red_Moon
2023-10-20 05:03:27 +0000 UTCHaha, you gotta love how the medic and Tahddeus fuss over S😂 They have a point, though. Oliver previously mentioned she wasn't eating enough, too, if I remember correctly. Knowing how these things usually work out, I expect Damien to hear about this as well and start fretting over Sebastian's food intake – perhaps even with the support of Ana & Co.
Red_Moon
2023-10-20 05:00:55 +0000 UTCThanks for the fun chapter. The way lacer is attracted to the raven queen is hilarious. It’s so well written, how he projects his deepseated desire for a partner onto his idea of the raven queen.
The Stars Align
2023-10-20 04:36:15 +0000 UTCThis is a great chapter... my only issue is that in chapter 180 Sebastien doesn't make any reference to visiting the infirmary at all... this chapter takes place on the same day, maybe adding a innocuous statement simply mentioning an eventful visit made to the infirmary for headache relief in chapter 180 could fix that , without needing to go into detail found in this chapter
Jim A
2023-10-20 03:07:08 +0000 UTCrecents => recent
Jim A
2023-10-20 03:03:39 +0000 UTCI’ve been looking forward to this all day, and it does not disappoint. She’s made “enough in-person appearances to last for some time.” She’s like a rock star: the Raven Queen has left the building. S. is thinking that the lack of appearances would make the controversy die down - heh. Also, I am enjoying these hints at S.’s transformation and the thing locked in her mind; it seems she might not be able to sustain Sebastien’s form as long as she thinks. Can’t wait for next week!
Jonathan Gordy
2023-10-20 02:24:43 +0000 UTCIt's effing Patreon deleting my spaces. I can't control it. It's got a grudge against italics in the middle of a sentence for some reason.
Azalea Ellis
2023-10-20 00:12:19 +0000 UTCThanks guys! Typos, my dreaded nemesis. It's really hard to see them after you've written them, for some reason.
Azalea Ellis
2023-10-20 00:10:59 +0000 UTCOh hell yes. That post script though…. I want more as always but appreciate every chapter as it comes. It’s a hell of a cliffhanger though.
Briar
2023-10-19 23:43:07 +0000 UTCTwo italics are lacking spaces between the words and the mext! Well…I did cast onespell. “Youneed to be keeping an eye on your apprentice’s food intake.
Erika
2023-10-19 23:40:05 +0000 UTCSuch a cool chapter, thanks!
Andreas Brunhofer
2023-10-19 23:38:42 +0000 UTCThaddeus opening the Raven Queen letter like a fanboy with a collector's item is too much for me. Love these Thaddy chaps!!
chumponimys
2023-10-19 23:27:06 +0000 UTC"The envelope was of black, of obviously expensive paper," possibly an extra "of" in there? Or a missing noun after "black?"
chumponimys
2023-10-19 23:26:01 +0000 UTC"Well-defines cheekbones" -> defined. "The combines stares" -> combined
BrilliantDawn
2023-10-19 23:23:15 +0000 UTC