Part 11: I'm Not Stopping This Time
Added 2025-04-16 14:54:36 +0000 UTCAll characters in this story are 18+
This story is completely fictional.
All acts in this story are fully consensual.
The second the front door clicked shut behind Jake, my phone buzzed again.
Dylan: Don’t care if Jake’s in the kitchen. Come downstairs. Now.
I stared at the message, heart hammering.
He didn’t know Jake had left. He didn’t know we were alone.
And if I told him—
I swallowed hard, thumbs already moving before I could second-guess it.
Me: He’s gone. You’ve got me all to yourself.
Three dots popped up. Then vanished.
No reply.
I stood frozen for a beat—then I heard it. A creak from below. A faint noise in the basement.
I nervously stepped into the basement, and there he was.
Dylan.
Shirtless. Just those tight gym shorts clinging to his thighs, the rest of him carved like a god. His chest was glistening slightly from a shower or a pump, shoulders broad and relaxed like he owned the world. Like he owned me. He didn’t move.
Didn’t say anything.
Just watched me, like a king waiting for worship.
I took a shaky breath. “Sooo… Jake’s gone. All night.”
Dylan’s lip curled into a smirk. “Good.” He shifted slightly. “Means you can moan as loud as you want.”
My throat went dry.
“You gonna stand there looking at me,” he said, voice low and firm, “or you gonna come here and show me what that mouth was made for?”
I stepped closer, pulse wild, eyes locked on his chest.
“Start at the top,” he murmured. “Work your way down. Slowly.”
I reached up, fingers brushing across his thick pecs. His skin was warm, chest rising and falling beneath my hands. He was solid—immovable—like touching him was some ancient ritual.
“You like this, boy?” he said, tone cocky, dipping his chin to watch me.
I nodded, too breathless to speak.
“Good. Now use your mouth.”
I leaned in, lips pressing softly to his chest—then tongue. His skin tasted like salt and skin and want. I kissed across his pecs, down the line between them, letting my hands roam lower.
“Slower,” he growled. “Like you mean it.”
I obeyed, dragging my tongue down the center of his abs, following the ridges like they were holy scripture. His hand found the back of my head, not pushing—just there. Possessive. Like he owned me now.
“Lower,” he said again.
“Keep going. Don’t stop till I say.”
I kissed the edge of his V-line, the waistband of his shorts. He smelled like sweat and soap and something raw underneath—masculine and intoxicating. His cock twitched inside his shorts, thick and heavy, begging to be touched.
“You like that?” he asked, looking down at me. His voice was cocky now—completely sure of himself. “You like being on your knees for me?”
I nodded, lips parted, breath shallow.
“Show me. Like you mean it.”
I looked up at him, then down. My hands slid over the waistband of his gym shorts, and he didn’t stop me.
Didn’t help either.
He wanted me to do it myself.
So I did. Slowly.
They dropped, pooling at his ankles.
And then—I forgot how to breathe.
He was hard. Heavy. Already dripping.
And he was smirking like he knew exactly what it was doing to me.
“Open your mouth, Spaghetti Noodle” he said. “Nice and slow.”
I obeyed.
He didn’t thrust. Didn’t grab my head. Just stepped forward—so smooth, so fucking confident—and fed his gorgeous cock to me, inch by inch, slowly.
I moaned the second his entire cock filled my mouth, the weight of it resting heavy on my tongue.
“Good boy,” he said.
I swore I could’ve come from that alone, the way he was asserting his dominance.
His hands found the back of my head, gentle but firm. “Now worship me properly.”
And I did.
God, I did.
Again... and again.. and again.
Slow, deep, messy. I bobbed my head, tongue swirling around the tip of his cock every time I pulled back. Watching him twitch as I teased his cock with my tongue. My cheeks hollowing as I sucked him back down.
He hissed through his teeth, abs flexing as I picked up speed, going faster by the minute, with spit dripping from my lips, dripping down his cock, all the way to his balls and on to the floor. I didn’t care if it was messy. I wanted to taste all of him. I couldn't get enough of him.
“Fucking look at me, Troy ,” he growled.
"Look at me while you suck me. I wanna see the hunger in your eyes."
I looked up, eyes glassy, jaw wide around him.
“That’s it. Just like that. You’re so fucking good at this.”
I moaned around him, and he twitched in my mouth.
“Such a good mouth,” he growled. “Knew you’d be good at this. Fuck—don’t stop. Don’t you dare stop, Troy”
I didn’t.
"I don't care who walks in, today, you are mine."
I sucked him like my life depended on it. Let him use my mouth. Let him fuck into me slowly, hips rolling, his abs tightening every time I moaned around him.
“Messy little thing,” he muttered. “God, I could come just from watching you.”
He didn’t though. Not yet.
His hips finally bucked forward, once, hard, and I gagged—but held on. I stayed in that position for about 30 seconds, with my nose touching his crotch, not able to breathe, but I wanted to impress him.
And then, he pulled out suddenly, his cock glistening with my spit, and reached down to yank me up.
I moaned again, louder this time. My cock was straining in my pants, untouched, aching.
“You’ve got thirty seconds,” he said, pulling out suddenly. “Get your clothes off.”
I blinked, breathless and dazed, saliva dripping from my chin. “What?”
“Get on the couch,” he said. “Hands and knees.”
My knees wobbled as I climbed up, heart pounding so loud it drowned out everything else. He came up right behind me, yanked my pants down, and groaned.
"Ah fuck, that cute tush of yours."
He pointed to the couch. “I’m fucking you. Now.”
I gasped as his hand landed on my ass—rough, greedy.
“You ready for this?” he asked, positioning behind me, cock teasing against my hole.
“God, yes.”
“Good. Because I’m not stopping this time until I nut in you.”
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Comments
Thank you Dug! This was the first story I ever published and it's received a lot of love <3
Troy
2025-05-06 13:22:29 +0000 UTCI have to say, this was the first thing of yours I read, and it is really fascinating and erotic. I love your slow build of tension.
Dugald Ferguson
2025-05-06 12:18:46 +0000 UTCPart 12 is last part right? So excited to see Troy take it.
Richard
2025-04-18 13:04:34 +0000 UTCWho is going to take care of this tent that I pitched reading this?😈.
Richard
2025-04-18 13:04:12 +0000 UTCThank you. That's the intention ;)
Troy
2025-04-16 15:48:39 +0000 UTCThe pictures are such a good touch! I’m literally leaking reading this.
Michael
2025-04-16 15:33:26 +0000 UTC