Jessie x pikachu pg.3
Added 2019-01-18 19:31:37 +0000 UTCthere's an uncomfortable amount of dick compared girl ratio in this lol, tell me what you guys think about the coloring on this one i used a different method to color it and i wondering if you guys see a difference.
Comments
When will you continue with this comic? I joined your patreon to see what happens to Jessie.
Kurt
2019-12-24 14:46:59 +0000 UTCThanks for the comment, and feedback my dude glad you like the layout im trying to explore different types of layouts so there less uniform and boring. as for the coloring i probably wont use this method coloring again, i did the coloring by using high saturation colors and instad of playing with opacity i just rolled around the color wheel to use stronger or lighter colors. The more i look at it the less i like it but i guess thats how it is some times lol.
Loony Comics
2019-01-19 21:08:27 +0000 UTCWell done Loonyjams! You always do good work with big sizes on both guys and gals, and this is a good example. There are some great effects here too. The overall layout works well for this sequence, and it's more creative than standard panels. Good job with the formatting! The action effects work well here too, particularly the action lines in the upper right and lower left. You did excellent work with the sound effects here as well. The BULK UP effect in particular is good, clever thinking with the brick texture for it! As for the coloring, something that does feel different is this seems darker or with sharper contrast. Particularly the black hatching lines and spikes stand out. Overall it feels darker/harsher than most of your other scenes, although it's hard to tell whether that's due to a different coloring method or just more dark shades and lines. If you don't mind the question, what did you do different in the coloring method? Thanks for continuing this comic loonyjams! Good luck with all your commissions!
Basque
2019-01-19 21:00:28 +0000 UTC
