HolloNut

Behind the scenes of Funfair: 2016, pages 5 & 6

Added 2024-11-18 17:00:11 +0000 UTC

Ohhh, what's this? Banjo seems to be getting into it... He's pouring the rest of his ice cream on his thirst-ridden friend. Lucky guy! (I guess? Sounds messy!)

Conker runs his mouth all over Banjo's parts, but there's no page-wide shot of the scene! I thought that one really brought the scene together in the final version.

Frankly, I'm not really sure what's going on in the bottom-left panel. It looks like Conker's hand grabbing Banjo's balls, or could it be his knee? Mysterious...

Moving on to page 6, you can tell right away I was very excited about the scene ("More, I guess"... really, me from 8 years ago?). Banjo shoots his load all over Conker, although it's all very brief, whereas I took my time more in the final version. Like I said before, I made Banjo's junk a lot more realistic in the final version, and I think it worked a lot better than the giant kebab he had instead of a dick in this prototype.

Banjo questions Conker's sanity, and immediately they talk about going to the pool. No panel with them chatting as they leave, that came only in the final version! And especially no introspective transition page! I really worked hard to improve the pacing for the final version, it turns out.

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