Difference 152 - Passing On Stories
Added 2020-06-17 20:54:27 +0000 UTCOh my lord sooooo much dialogue to write by hand.... oof. I'm trying to better get exposition across without dragging it out, I think that's why chapter 2 was so long. I'm getting better at it though, I used to be afraid of an event only being one page long but heck not anymore!
This scene right now by itself was much longer, and I'm glad it's not now. I wanna get this story to people because I have such great things planned!
Now. For a real argument. Books with pictures or books without pictures?
