Brewster's Brood - Pt. 39
Added 2024-09-08 01:32:20 +0000 UTC(Author's Note: This one's going to seem a
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Another good but short chapter!
Si
2024-09-22 21:39:28 +0000 UTCBinge read this story over the last day and a half. Lovin it!!
Trav
2024-09-10 01:04:28 +0000 UTCThe Golf Group was already included in the previous version of MRS. CHURCHILL'S NOTES, but the Hotel Group is new. I think that it would be nice if the CoC has its own Patreon post, though. It's easier to check any changes, specially if you added a mini changelog (or at least the date of the latest update to it.)
lostone2
2024-09-09 07:10:04 +0000 UTCWhile I love this story, I'm beginning to think the author has over reached here a little bit. I hate to say it, but there may be too many women. Even with the helpful cast of characters list, I can't keep track of all the girls we have now, let alone the ones who have yet to even enter the game. And, yet...I have the sneaking suspicion that the other shoe has yet to drop... Writing quality is on point. Plot is interesting. Characters are good if a confusing to keep track of. Pacing is ok...a little slow, but I think it needs to be to remain believable. I guess in the end, I just don't see how we will get the other girls into the game before everything comes off the rails in a way that can only be described as biblical. Good work. Even if I don't see where this is going to go.
Kaywye
2024-09-08 07:42:20 +0000 UTC
