The Fertile Grove: The Beginning (Ch. 1)
Added 2023-04-22 21:04:36 +0000 UTCThe Fertile Grove: The Beginning
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Skimmed this again after reading it originally on LE. Great story. Love the deep layers of thought that went into it
Ian B
2024-02-16 18:37:39 +0000 UTCI just finished reading the 4th chapter and that thought just came to my mind as well and came here looking to see if anyone else had asked that.
KernFlakes
2023-11-23 00:34:23 +0000 UTCSo...how do they pee? Are pendants hanging from trees randomly shooting streams of urine? April goldenshowers? Does his bag become saturated with piss?
Michael R
2023-05-12 04:41:36 +0000 UTCMore is coming!
Corrupting Power
2023-05-07 21:38:45 +0000 UTCOne of the most entertaining and creative stories you've written! Absolutely loved it! More in this series pls!
Invictus
2023-05-07 06:26:41 +0000 UTCI'm conflicted. I loved the story and can't wait to read more but at the same time you have so many other great ones already. Either way, I guess I just have to wait and enjoy whatever is next.
Terrik392
2023-04-29 21:54:28 +0000 UTCNot the Threadbinder world. Very different set of magical systems in operation.
Corrupting Power
2023-04-26 07:03:17 +0000 UTCThis is a great start. Would be cool if you could find an illustrator to turn it into a comic strip
pohmii Holloman
2023-04-25 22:31:15 +0000 UTCYou did it again. This was filled with everything you could want from a story although in all the stories you create a have no bloody idea how you keep all the names straight for the right person in the correct story unless you have the world’s largest database of characters but even that wouldn’t be so easy. Thanks again for sharing another fun read.
J.D.
2023-04-24 03:52:19 +0000 UTCDamn I enjoyed this one alot!
SovietDegendays
2023-04-23 08:34:30 +0000 UTCThere will be. Originally, it had been intended to sort of be a one-and-done, but the person who commissioned it wanted to see a lot more of the character and the universe he inhabits, and had some thoughts on how I could continue the story, so there is more coming.
Corrupting Power
2023-04-23 07:53:25 +0000 UTCDefinitely needs some additional chapters. Absolutely brilliant story.
Roadspill
2023-04-23 02:04:33 +0000 UTCAlso, either "military" or "army", not both. If you want a two-word equivalent, try "military service" or "armed forces"
Ronan
2023-04-23 01:05:23 +0000 UTCMagnificent story. It's labeled as Chapter 1, but seems like a completed tale. Will there be additional chapters?
Ronan
2023-04-23 01:04:03 +0000 UTCBrilliant!
Old Dragon
2023-04-23 00:05:43 +0000 UTCGo in with the plan… four years in advance. Seriously, dude’s gonna be hired to test some defenses, the target will think nothing’s wrong, and suddenly wake up to eight different security breaches and his wife mysteriously pregnant with a half-dwarf.
Otterly Ruddertail
2023-04-23 00:05:08 +0000 UTCAwesome, Batman level of planning boyo. There's a guy who will go far in life.
Kaywye
2023-04-22 23:38:52 +0000 UTCExcellent, look forward to seeing more... If the indication of chapter 1 is accurate. Is this the threadbinder world
James Waske
2023-04-22 23:35:55 +0000 UTCExcellent
James Johnston
2023-04-22 23:08:33 +0000 UTCFucking legend. He wasn't a man with a plan - he was the man with ALL the plans. Absolutely loved this!
Jeffrey Sutyla
2023-04-22 21:55:00 +0000 UTC
