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Quaranteam - Chapter 50

CHAPTER 50

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Andy only sort of has a rough understanding of McCallister's importance in the narrative, and he's got a lot going on, so he's a little overwhelmed here and there.

Corrupting Power

I love this story, so don't take this as harsh criticism, but I've noticed similar mistakes throughout it. I read it all during the last week, so previous chapters were quite fresh when I read the next. My guess is that keeping the continuation for as many stories as CP is writing in parallell is hard, and sometimes a ball gets dropped.

HN

Fantastic chapter. The proposal was adorable. One question, and this may just be me missing something, but why doesn’t Andy know who McCallister is when he just spent the last day getting his wife reimprinted?

Steele

Love the end of book one. this book is really great, and I can't wait for the second book to start and the continuation of Phil's Tail. I love these kinds of books even though you don't find many writers using end of the world type things as the basis for their books you did a phenomenal job with this first book. this is one of maybe 3-4 books that I have found that uses an end of the world event as the basis for their book. these books are just so interesting because anything can happen in these books because viruses can cause any number of things to happen to the body even extraordinary things that nobody would expect. please keep writing and if you need ideas for any new series just ask your readers i'm sure that we can come up with several ideas that you can twist into something good.

Cynthia Parker

I had too reread this chapter twice. Great ending too book one first off. Second the uprising while I feel for the women I do this is a very dangerous situation. Not too be taken lightly. Covington should die he excuted Cruz but an uprising in the middle of Marshall law. I can not wait for book two so many things wow just wow....

David Hoffman

Finally in a financial position to be here again, just in time to get to experience the full splendor of book 1. Thank God. Cp, your writing continues to be incredible in its quality, and somehow equally surprising and viscerally satisfying in its content. All I can say is that I can't wait for a physical copy to become available so I can have it on my bookshelf for when the power goes out. Insanely good. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Kaywye

WOW! Just fucking WOW!

Old Dragon

Wondeful. Great story, great ending. Nice twist ending. Really excellent world building and continuity. I can't wait to read QB2, or to own a physical copy of QB1

One heck of a closing to book 1. Looking forward to more

Jon Kohout

I don't know where to begin, but what a wonderful close to book one. A massive thank you for your efforts in putting this story together, can't wait for book 2!!

Nick J

Chills… just chills… Thank you for bringing us all on this journey!

Hugh Peeble

Excellent ending to book 1 :D

Good job CP. I didn’t see that coming so soon. What a great chapter, story and book. The interview was hanging over the story like the Sword Of Damocles and you nailed it. The Piper proposal was icing on the cake. I’m looking forward to book two. I’m glad you had fun writing this because it definitely shows.

SP Rupert

Awesome. Just awesome.

Mark

Oh My! Great job!!

Shaqjor477

Just brilliant. Can’t wait to read what happens next.

NEIL DENBOW

So? When is the book out? I really need to read it all again and again and again.....outstanding!

Patricio Pinto

Wow. Just damn. What a fucking masterpiece.

Anthony Samora


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