Quaranteam - Chapter 31
Added 2021-11-05 23:05:08 +0000 UTCChapter 31
Before they even took the blin
Comments
Another fantastic chapter. One note. There was one typo. “Why would anyone task” should be take.
Brathadoir
2021-11-27 21:23:26 +0000 UTCFiona did specify that she would only join the family if he agreed to her one condition sight unseen, so he doesn't get mad because he's agreed to it, and the girls know that.
Corrupting Power
2021-11-26 22:29:44 +0000 UTCI just reRead the series again. In my honest opinion I am surprised that Andy didn't get mad and snap on all of them after the fact of him finding out who the 2 unknown people were. Andy and Fiona had past History, maybe he wanted to reconnect with her physically and emotionally first before adding them to the family
Rick Shirer
2021-11-26 21:02:43 +0000 UTCI dunno, my guess is one of the other women on base mentioning something subtle that Ms. Couric then ran to ground. I mean, she is a very good reporter.
Kaywye
2021-11-22 07:20:10 +0000 UTCFor what it’s worth my money is on Niko trying to pump up the heroism of her Andy.
SP Rupert
2021-11-10 18:42:19 +0000 UTCI'll be very curious to know how she found out about the poker game. In circles like these it's not the sort of secret that gets around. Overall very happy with the story heavy chapters and to see this tale keep moving forward.
Shan Wilson
2021-11-09 16:25:04 +0000 UTCfools, all of them
Rick Shaw
2021-11-07 03:44:29 +0000 UTCTypically we have about a 70/30 split in terms of sex chapters versus sexless chapters, and for this one, there was a lot of plot that needed to happen, but the next one'll have two different sex scenes at the back of it, both of which the audience knows is coming.
Corrupting Power
2021-11-06 23:04:33 +0000 UTCCan you believe someone on Literotica said I don't do enough cliffhangers? ;)
Corrupting Power
2021-11-06 20:25:03 +0000 UTCAnd the Quaranteam world intrigue continues! What a delicious and somewhat disappointedly non sex chapter in which the reader gets to simultaneously build Andy’s character while exposing some raw nerves of New Eden and end the installment in suspense leaving the audience on the edge of their seats. Will Katie Curic pursue the break down of Andy Rook? Will the old power and money in New Eden be chronicled and publicly ridiculed for how they treat women? Will Katie earn favors from Emily and Sarah or will she forever shoot herself in the foot and not ever be able to interview the future epic Druid Gunslinger saga stars again? Will Andy ever really know what is going on under his roof? It’ll be a long few weeks until the reader gets to see what’s next for Andy Rook and his family. Well done Corrupting Power!
SP Rupert
2021-11-06 08:54:34 +0000 UTCBrutal place to break the chapter, but I knew the issue had to come up. I’m already jonesing for the rest!
Rick Shaw
2021-11-06 05:34:48 +0000 UTCSo I am thinking that the lady from Mr ahole household spilled the beans about the poker game. They will never let that be in the report.
David Hoffman
2021-11-06 05:02:56 +0000 UTCLove the Series!!!!!! Keep em coming!!!!
Rick Shirer
2021-11-05 23:51:02 +0000 UTC
