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明日から使える英会話04

Is this English correct? 英語しゃべれないので、まちがってるかもしれません。 信用しないでね!

明日から使える英会話04

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I agree, but I'd change it to "Your mouth was made to pleasure my dick"

bikerslave

It's understandable, but I would change a couple of things. I'd change "Come on, suck my big dick!" to something like "Come on, suck my huge dick!" or "Come on, suck my massive cock!" (There's nothing wrong with this line, I just thought that "suck my big dick!" sounded a little juvenile/silly and not too serious, so I made some variations with synonyms for "big" and "dick", but the original is correct) I'd also change "Your mouth is meant to give pleasure to my dick." To simplify that, you could just say "Your mouth is meant to pleasure my dick.", as that has the same meaning. That sounds a little akward, so I'd change it to something like: "Your mouth was made for pleasuring my dick" (Changing "is meant to" to "was made for" and "give pleasure to" to "pleasuring") The full sentence might look something like: Come on, suck my massive cock! Your mouth was made for pleasuring my dick. slurp-slurp...

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