Tohru SET (NEW STORY/ UPDATED)
Added 2018-07-09 07:42:10 +0000 UTCHey folks,
as promised. I took the weekend to rewrite the story and take my time with it. I completely changed it after the first 2-3 pages. Added more pages and changed the overall story.
Should be better now.
The old version of the story is still available if you prefer it.
There will be no further changes to the Tohru set. Moving on to the Makise Set.
Comments
Really great! The new story is a lot better. Love the improvements you added.
Spicy-Tacos
2018-07-21 04:33:50 +0000 UTCMuch better. Thanks for that.
Zakuzelo
2018-07-11 18:53:01 +0000 UTCWelp, I did like the previous version enough already, but I definately appreciate the improvements you done
Re-Maker
2018-07-09 10:12:56 +0000 UTCKobayashi: Not unless she gets selected to join the poll rooster. Kanna: Not happening. Too young of a character.
Tonkatsu-chan
2018-07-09 09:25:23 +0000 UTCloving the new story any chance of this getting a sequel showing the fates of kanna and kobayashi?
Rob the Hungry
2018-07-09 08:27:52 +0000 UTC
