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RAM - Page 10 ๐Ÿ˜‰ Back in Business - NSFW

Any help with the grammar wilk be appresiated lovelies! (since english is not my first language )

RAM - Page 10 ๐Ÿ˜‰ Back in Business - NSFW

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best glorious as always!!

Sherrie Mora

I would gladly love to help! In the first box, there should be a coma after Brainstorm, and change "to" to "too". Second box might read better if you put it as "I'm going to-!" but it also looks fine as is. Third box should read "Come on, Percy. I'm just starting to have fun with you."

Sherrie Mora


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