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Research About Me - Fancomic - Page 02

 Im excited to announce this โค๐Ÿคญ

*Sweeties English is not my first language, so If you see any grammatical mistake, it will be highly appresiated if you point any grammar mistake for me!**

Also this is a Patreon Early access exclusive view guys :) please do not distibute or share with anybody YET! ๐Ÿ™Œโค

Research About Me - Fancomic - Page 02

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Thank you so much for the corrections sweety! I changed everything up ๐Ÿ’• I think I may post the dialogs first then post everything correctlyone the page is completally done to not spoil the draws with the dialogs TvT thank you so much ror your patience

Erika Skerzz

aaw poor brainstorm! talking about emotions isn't easy ^^ and I noted some grammar issues ^^ "But no" should be "But not"; "someone have ever" should be "someone has ever"; "incredible" should be "incredibly"; "begging" should be beginning"; removed "of" so it reads "but you are (sorta) brilliant"; and change the last sentence to "would you please, at least, consider what I told you?" even if English isn't ur first language ur doing a good job here :)

Sherrie Mora


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