splash page art
Added 2024-04-19 16:52:57 +0000 UTC
So I figured the team's fight with Karth would make for a good splash page. Here's the 1st draft sketch. I was like, 'damn! 99% there already!
Thoughts?
Comments
Don't worry too much about it. A lot of web novels are know to have a character that is in all respects a child except in age and I think you've done a good job of making Nat feel like a person with small person problems lol.
ForverSOlo
2024-04-23 01:25:16 +0000 UTCI really, really dig that Karth's head is vaugely Baboonish instead of the stereotypical Orcish face and head. Feels both menacing and unique.
Ronin
2024-04-20 04:47:26 +0000 UTCIsn’t Karth supposed to have a visible demonic glyph on his forehead?
H
2024-04-20 00:16:14 +0000 UTCCould you perhaps alter where Karth's arm meets the bionic/robot arm? That little gap between it and his arm just looks off. Especially with a trolls regeneration. It looks like he has an amputated stump rather than an integrated arm. Other than that, it looks pretty damn good to me. Although I will agree with that other commenter to a degree, Nat seems to reach up to Perry's waist right now height wise. Everything else is fine, she just needs to be a bit taller. Currently my brain puts her as a halfling Artificer when looking at this.
Owen Kaz
2024-04-20 00:07:44 +0000 UTCI don't....know?
Macronomicon
2024-04-19 22:29:18 +0000 UTCLooks great! But Nat looks a little too child-like. I know she’s small, but is she “you’re on a list” small?
Fervent Fiend
2024-04-19 22:05:07 +0000 UTCAmazing
Kiew
2024-04-19 21:27:57 +0000 UTCWow, that's a great picture. Karth needs a red bionic eye though.
Sanairb
2024-04-19 18:34:50 +0000 UTCNot sure! I like this one a lot more. I think the humanoid arms/fingers adds something. I’ve definitely anthropomorphized boomer so maybe the humanoid shape just resonates. Not sure!
Hayden Leech
2024-04-19 18:31:14 +0000 UTCPregnant heather-body in the background acting as a cheerleader?
Kurt A
2024-04-19 17:57:32 +0000 UTCyou think he just looks bad in print as an ovoid? The possibility has occured to me.
Macronomicon
2024-04-19 17:04:09 +0000 UTCI especially like boomer. The other cover makes him look a little funky.
Hayden Leech
2024-04-19 17:00:08 +0000 UTCyeah, i wasn't specific enough, i think.
Macronomicon
2024-04-19 16:59:46 +0000 UTCHomeboy needs a the symbol of Gna’Kis glowing on his forehead.
Hayden Leech
2024-04-19 16:59:28 +0000 UTCDamn, looks great
Ghost4576
2024-04-19 16:59:09 +0000 UTCEpic!
Hayden Leech
2024-04-19 16:58:37 +0000 UTCLooks great, I thought boomer was still kinda egg shaped with magnetic arms?
Clifton Thrasher
2024-04-19 16:58:35 +0000 UTCfixed it!
Macronomicon
2024-04-19 16:55:03 +0000 UTCJt good
Thando Nkadimeng
2024-04-19 16:54:56 +0000 UTCRight?
Timothy Dana
2024-04-19 16:54:14 +0000 UTCWhere's the damn picture? 1 sec...
Macronomicon
2024-04-19 16:53:31 +0000 UTC
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