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Book 2 cover Rough draft feedback

So, Here's the rough draft. We're probably gonna do one more revision, then call it good. The artist sadly couldn't fit Mass Driver in the picture and still have space for Heather and Perry's expression to be visible in thumbnail.

Give me feedback! Then scroll through the feedback you like, and heart the stuff you think sounds like a good idea. I Personally like the background and posing but want Heather to be more aggressive/animated.

Perry looks a bit too much like prof. X, lol.

Lemme know what you think!

Book 2 cover Rough draft feedback

Comments

Why would it be super suit when Perry's whole thing is armored iron man?

Samuel Terrazas

I like most of the suggestions but i want to stress that I want the armor to be slightly more super suit and less body armor. and it really shouldnt match right?

Jackson Andrews

I think even slightly altering the eyebrow shape and angle you can change Heather's vibe. Look how Perry is giving brainy and low key mean because he has vulcan/elf brows.

Kiew


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