Wrote this for fun on saturday: Generic System Apocalypse

I’m a smidge mad at myself for not reading this right away when you wrote it. But I’m also excited that I have loads of chapters to read now.

SunderGoldmane

Epic harems are like the icing on the cake they make great stories funny

mhaj58

Why, you craving epic harem?

Macronomicon

hey man, your not going to make this one into an epic harem are you?

Thundermike00

I concur. Loving this

Adrian Gorgey

I enjoyed it as well and would further upgrade my monthly donation for more Macronomicon works

I'd read it

Seconded on upping donation level for more of Jeb.

a passing Fnord

Good writer writes well. More news at 11.

Dee

Presenting the baron of the chocolate bar, duke of the candied almonds, defender of the great snickers bar! High King M&M!

A disgruntled nondescript squirrel

If writing this story is stress relief for you, please feed us starving readers more, sir. Hopefully it helps with the flow of ideas and structuring for WOTR as well, but honestly I'm just excited to read either!

Sebastian Viller

Damn now I want to eat me some M&Ms. Would be funny if you continued this - sort of - fan-fic parallel to his own, incognito - somewhat - but just Better :D

Deinos

Who that is a fun read. you rocked your category goal that's for sure. Like everyone else i wouldn't mind reading more at all awesome. Just not at the cost of WOTR. Two novels sounds a bit heavy for you though Haha

Jake

When wake of the ravages is done. This better be next haha

R. R. Quan

More plz

Godlyskeleton

Technically, it was a magic apocalypse that they just so happen to have a way of measuring magic that resemble a system

Jacob

May I have some more sir, also really like how you explain how he's the only one to have magic

Jacob

Ok, I want- no. I NEED MORE OF THIS

This was great!

Tyler Tate

ok so love it BUT please don't cock block and ending on your current fiction. At least give it a proper stopping point. You KNOW why I'm saying this. Also someone has been reading RISING FROM THE DEPTHS

A disgruntled nondescript squirrel

I would up my donation level to get more of this. Because this, is gonna be EPIC! Smart old soldier gets magic and starts using it in all the most inventive ways and can't rely on his body because of a missing foot. This is the best 'dump a guy in the deep end' start to a System Initialization story I've seen yet.

Sean Quinn

yes.

Beeees!

Please continue!!!!!

drag0nreb0rn

Outer Sphere was also a system apocalypse story, right?

Weeb Dealer

Holy Crap, more. This is way better than so many of the, "I was just a regular teen, until the system came" stories.

Matthew Davis

Well damn, I was really getting into it and... end.

Chris

I'd enjoy reading more of this

Joe ?

Damn, I’d definitely keep reading this on a whenever the mood strikes basis.

Agree, this was great, way better than the standard "I'll take an ax, and push strength". I would read as much of this as you write.

The Shard

This is great and I want to see more of it.

alethiophile

Moooooore!

Alston Sleet

more please

person1357

I uh... know you said this would be it... but maybe with a time skip? we could get at least the ending of the tutorial? Please?

Alex Matheny

I second this. Very fun read

I'd read more of this if you want to continue

DeeSharkman