Alpha Luna (Ch 5) Page 48 - SKETCH
Added 2019-12-11 04:40:20 +0000 UTCWhat was going to happen after page 47 changed at least 3 times so I started over every time until I decided on this. I can't say much about the other sketches without spoiling them, so I'll be adding them on the next delivery zip.
In any case, resolving the battle per se, wasn't about a killing blow but about the resolution and conflict going in within Luna. That was more important for me than showcasing strength.
But I think I'll go more deeply in explanation when we have the finished page, I assume in about 2 weeks from now. Until then!
Leo
Comments
I think while it may feel overly long, especially if you have been following me for the past two years. Time in which I had several hiatuses when the story barely moved forward if not frozen. But I'm pretty sure for those who now may read it in one go, it will flow naturally. That's my hope :)
Leonardo Vidal
2019-12-11 16:02:26 +0000 UTCAnd thanks for this page too... and it's interesting because it felt like you were indulging a lot in that show of strength, it nearly got resolved in one blow and a really dazzling display in that one blow. but let's see what you mean when i'll be able to read the following pages. Thanks.
Simone Spinozzi
2019-12-11 07:54:27 +0000 UTC
