Maryne

Everett Was Right - Exclusive lineart (2/2)

Added 2017-07-31 23:00:24 +0000 UTC

There you go! The second page!

I'll admit, since those probably aren't gonna be used in the final comic, I didn't bother double-checking grammar and spelling, so I'm sorry if the English is a bit wonky.

Please do let me know what you think, criticism is always welcome, even if those are still drafts!

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Thank you ♥.

A little context:

The girls, Maël and Eve, are making plans to get into the local Casino incognito and sabotage the money machines with the help of the brilliant notes of their newfound "friend" Hugo (glasses), who figured out a way to make all the machines win at-will. The owners of the Casino found out about these notes, but didn't know where to find them; and so they hired Maël and Eve to find and retrieve the notebook. They got it without too much trouble, and realized as they snuck into the house that it was the work of a kid. Not thinking much of it, they let the owners of the Casino know they successfully carried-out their mission. When the owners then suspiciously asked for Hugo's address, the girls figured something wasn't right. They came back to Hugo's house to put the notebook back (not after scanning every pages of it of course), but the tween found them out, waiting for them. The three of them had a talk, and the girls discovered the real intention behind the notebook (spoilers: it wasn't to gain some easy money) and the intentions and shady business of the Casino owners: retrieve the notes, destroy them, and "get rid" of the kid who figured out their machines were rigged... and then some. Now here they are, in their friend's closed Tabletop store, planning to infiltrate the infamous Casino and.. basically wreck havoc while getting some good coins in their pockets.